Oh, poor Victor/Victoria! But you have their characters down so well XD The sad part is that this conundrum and ignorance is historically accurate. *facepalm* It's almost amazing that married people in Victorian England ever had children at all...

That was beautiful! Every chapter had me giggling - very well written =) Normally I'm not a Victor/Victoria fan but I loved every sentence. I was only disappointed by the fact that it had to end!

Oh my, this was just perfect! God, and I thought the lead up to *my* first time was awkward! Poor Victor and Victoria- I thought you wrote them both quite well.
Nice one!
Erisah

I realize this fic is several years old, but I just wanted to let you know I actually read this when it was first published and it really stayed with me. So much so, it actually inspired me to write a piece in a different fandom about the first night between equally awkward and shy characters. I just thought I’d look around to see if I could find it again and I’m very glad I did. You have a wonderful writing style and an extremely entertaining story here. :D

aw!! Victor is perfectly in character! Nice job!

"Aunt Lavinia"? Was she an albino, by any chance? ^_^ hee. Lovecraft/Corpse Bride crossover might be good, now I come to think about it...

LOL so awkward! lol but I like the ending. :) Very sweet!

Wow. This is the first VxV story I've read that broached the subject of 'sex.' Your portrayal of Victoria and Victor was flawlessly well-done. If not the movie, those two will go down in history for having the most awkward honeymoon sex ever!

Yet, I can't blame those two for not knowing what to do, given that they live in an era where sex was seen as an improper and vulgar thing to talk about, let alone enjoy. But I'm sure V&V will know what to do once they get to know each other more. The two of them reading the novel was so sweet!

Victoria is stronger than she looks, she tried to break through her door to escape her parents. I like the ending and Victor and Victoria do need to get to know eatch other better, the hadn't even met each other before the arranged marrage.

This is pretty good so far that I've read. Probably in that corset part if she took it off it wouln't make much difference anyway. She's probably pretty skinny.

Good thing Victor didn't drop Victoria, or for that matter, do anything else clumsy. He's a bit of a klutz.

AWW! ... That's all I can think of to say, truly. It was so cute and funny and in-character that I'm speechless. That's a compliment, by the way :P

-C.C. :)

Reading this for the second time, I have to say that this is still the most utterly adorable piece of fanfiction I have ever read.

This was really good, I love how you kept the characters in character!

This is amazingly brilliant!! Its completely accurate as to what I think Victor and Victoria would act/feel on their wedding night! Truly top work. It stayed true to the characters at all times.