I liked it. Keep going even if it takes FOREVER!

Ahahahahahaha! thats all i can say ahahahaha

Be you of the Kingdom of Airyglyph, we pray you are devoured by a heard of small pigmy vampire elephants.
hahahaha if i could stop laughing long enuff i would tell you that was good but i cant stop laughing! hahaha

This was very good! On to the next chapter!

"You’re not going anywhere for I wield the power of Alla Stoccata!" -- Heh, yeah Shakespeare put quite a few terms in this scene that made me scratch my head: "fee-simple", "alla stoccata"... ^_^ Maybe Shakespeare lost his thesaurus...

Alas for forgetful Shelby! Well, Mirage DID give warning, quite awhile ago, to not call her 'Father'. ;) Yep, I'm thinking Lasselle might be next...

Poor Fayt...the blue birds are going to get him...again. ;)

Ha! I love Cliff in this chapter. Poor poor Mirage. Good job ^-^

Three men has died... Oh poor them... Well, Cliff and Fayt didn't... Ah, ninja! Ninja Mirage kills Shelby!! Who knew Albel was samurai-o-phobic XD The next shall die is thy Lasselle!! Nice chapter =D Update soon!

Ha-Ha! I bet the fic you 'stole' Maria from is 'Killing Albel Nox'!

"Nel looked emotionless at her. “Yeah, your right…you’re neither big nor fat. But you are still a looser.”
Peppita crossed her arms and nodded with a big ‘that’s right’ smile."
-- ^_^
-- Couple things: "your" should be "you're" and "looser" should be "loser", though I can't really blame you for that one. It's always hard to tell when to use the one with two o's and when to use the one with one. Here's my trick: I say it out loud, and if the word I want to use has a kind of 'z' sound, like in this case, then there's only one 'o', so it's 'loser', 'lose', 'losing', etc. If you wanted the word with the softer 's' sound, then you want two o's, like 'looser', 'loose', 'loosing'.

"…oh, you could get married! If you did that then you could fight all you want for the first month of marriage.”" -- Man, this place has strange laws. ^_^

I wonder how Romero's poisoned apples have foiled Mirage's plans...I suppose maybe they killed somebody she wanted to kill herself... ;)

"Cliff will be mine even if I have to drug him and remove his vocal cords…um I mean even if I must woo him to no bound." -- Good thing Cliff wasn't there to hear that... ^_^

Mirage is dangerous... :) ...I can easily picture her killing (or attempting to kill) both Albel and Nel at the end, because they slipped and called her 'Father'...

Keep going...this is good...

Bwhaha. Great scene!! The cut scene with Maria jumping in and then having Nel asking if their date was still on was funny!! XD And the part where the arrow!! XD!! Ah, I think people should call Mirage, " Father Mirage " more often, more killing at random spots, lol.
I wonder what's going to happen with Cliff.. Lol.. Poor Romero.. Poor guy.
Such a awesome funny fanfiction. Update soon!

Haha! tis is funy! i love it!! update!

Very nice fic. The humor's great. Waiting for next chapter... :P

Oh no! Not Father Mirage! That was good. I think I laughed the hardest when Albel called Cliff a goose. Poor Fayt and the birdseed. This is funny, I like this humor.

I don't think it is stupid humor...It is wierd but not stupid...Anyway I love reading this fic...I LIKE IT TONE!YAY for you. Later.

The only place I noticed word-swaps this time was in the first full paragraph: in "...my thoughts are wondering again..." 'wondering' should be 'wandering' in this case... and in "Oh shinny metal, to me be true!" 'shinny' should be 'shiny'. :)

Heh, that 'shiny' one is something I always remember because of that FF6 scene with Gau and Sabin: "Shiny, shiny. Shiny shiny shiny!" "Can anything be that shiny?" "Does Mr. Thou like shiny thing?" "I told you, I'm not Mr. Thou! That's Mr. Thou, over there!" Or something like that... ;)

There were a lot of funny scenes in this one...

“Look worm, I killed the last. Do you condemn me for such?”
“For killing no, for male PMS yes.”
“WHAT? I’ll kill you for that.”
“Oh but if you do; then who, I ask, will you turn to when you need marmalade?”
Albel inadvertently started to drool. “Um…marmalade…”
-- ^_^ Heh, Albel likes marmalade...And then Mirage wants a potion to use on Cliff... ^_^

That scene with Kiki - reminds me of the monkeys in Earthbound...you may not know that game, it's an old one for the SNES...but there were a lot of monkeys! :) Poor Fayt.

And I loved Cliff's comment about Fayt: "...And he is the king of Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos." - Heh, the three Fates! Let's see if I remember...Clotho spins people's fates (like thread), Lachesis measures them, and Atropos severs them... ;)

At this point I have to mention a line from the original script: "...flesh, how art thou fishified!" ...Given the general trend of the conversation, he's probably referencing something...risque...but, c'mon, they used the word 'fishified'! Ha!

Heh, Ursus had to translate for Peppita... :)

Cool! I'm a Twinkie Scout! I think I better stay away from swinging on vines, though...I'm so clumsy I'd probably fall off and squash Fayt...but you never know... ;)