i love it...you write well...

XD OMG lol you should really consider doing more one-shots of RoyxEd I love them XP You really do have a nak for them bye bye for now CW47 OUT

Would have been better if you had gone on a bit further. Yeah, I get its a good way to end if you're in it for the poetry's sake. But its RoyEd fans you're dealing with here. We're downright rabid.

hehe. Still nice, though.

cute! there's only a few mistakes: al cant do expressions (unless his fish expression and blush anime version xD) so ed cant know if he's ok looking at his 'face'. however, well done!

so cute! *squeals* I like the idea of roy in the rain. like it alot ^^

That was irresistably cute. Another awesome fic from you.^^

Funny! Starnge though, i didn't know al could hum.

Great story! It was really cute. :D I hope to read more from you, kinda like these type of stories. You're a great writer!

just like life sometimes things end too soon

^_^

Cute. You heard of the make-a-better-story-past-midnight, huh?
I think it works well. Good job! ^^

i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it!
~tiff

Teehee, so cute X3!

It's such a cute and somewhat emotional story. Please write more One-Shots. X3!

~Cat