A great story. Very good.

omg that was gr8 writing keep it up XD

Omg I love this! That is so cool, that little Luke and Leia try and stop Anakin even before they're born! How awesome is that? lol Great story - you should write a sequel where Obi-Wan helps!

Wonderful story, just wonderful! I loved that the twins saved their father even before their birth. That makes so much sense since they are strong in the Force.

I liked it. very sweet and I liked how Anakin felt Padme's pain

I do love your version of Anakin's last minute change of heart. And as always, you have such a wonderfully fresh take on things. The twins wanting to save their father is a lovely theme, and I'm glad that you thought of it because I get to read the wonderful results!

Oh, and Threepio saving the day was my favorite part :P The force works in mysterious ways!

Don't stop there!

Yay, go babies!

i loved this...i wish that rots had ended this way instead!! i love stories where anakin doesn't turn to the dark side...he is just to hott to be evil!! :)

YEYEYEYEYEY! Just reading up on all of your stories!!

Its cool how you put Luke and Leia in saving their father from darkness. I like the connection of love between Padme and Anakin. I'm eager to read more.

That was good, now you should continue. Yes, yes, continue you must.

Drat, it's a one shot, but it's so good. Could you please write either a sequel for it or another chapter say what happens with the Jedi?

i loved it! please please please continue. very very cute!

Aww, that was absolutely sweet! I loved it. :)