keep writing your doing great update soon

adverturous... i like this story. can't wait for the update... who can it be?

Maddie, what can I say? It is fantastic. I also liked your other story that you told me to read tonight. See you tomorrow!

im such a sucker for a good story, pretty good it reminds me of pirates of the carribean somehow. maybe the black smith bit.

oh and maddie i told you once i told you twice its MOUTH not lips, mouth. repeat it mouthh

'he lifted a drink to his lips taking in a mouthful of fresh water.'

WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME...oh well the story is good update soon