This story flows well it has a very good characterisation of both Selmak and Jacob which is way it works so well thank you for your story

I love the give and take between Jacob and selmak. For that part it is an excellent story...However, I have to say that I disliked your take on Lantash very much, and I also didn't feel Jacob would respond to Daniel as you had him do...especially since we know that Jacob prefers first Martouf/Lantash, then Daniel for Sam ... anyone rather than Jack, regardless what the writers tried to make us beleive in one of their worst episodes ever.

LOL! I love it! I especially liked how well you caught the dynamics between Jake and his symbiote. Keep up the good work! _

I was thoroughly amused by this story. Congratulations on your Stargatefanawards nomination; you deserve it.

Sweet! This is great I love it. Are you going to do any more eps as seen from Jake's pov?