 Pagan Twylight 2007-05-20 . chapter 1I love the give and take between Jacob and selmak. For that part it is an excellent story...However, I have to say that I disliked your take on Lantash very much, and I also didn't feel Jacob would respond to Daniel as you had him do...especially since we know that Jacob prefers first Martouf/Lantash, then Daniel for Sam ... anyone rather than Jack, regardless what the writers tried to make us beleive in one of their worst episodes ever. |