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Akasha721
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseun huh, yeah, yeah, you got them! yeah you did.
amethyst rulzz
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseAW!>.< it's so sweet!*_* i really wanna add your review points now..*giggles* i have to particularly agree with "Misster. K" (love it when yohji asked aya answered "two years...maybe more" gotta say its so Aya! ^^ lord really love the way you write it! ^^) n "calen.kun" (It's so refreshing. They understand each other without having to explicitly state their feelings. *melts*)..

i think u did a wonderful job!!^^ COOKIES FOR U!*_*

but i actually think that this story isn't finished..>.< i'd really like a sequel..*__* or is it just wishful thinking on my part??T_T
Omnipotent One Pimp
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseAw. That was sweet. I read one of your other stories and liked the way you wrote so figured I would check out your other work. Very nice, well written and very cute. Keep it up ^~.
ederyn
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abuseOkay, I have a billion other things to do but I made time to read this since you said it was your favorite of all your fics...and OMG all I can say is, "Aw!" I love A/Y coming together stories, in fact, they're the only WK pairing I read, and this one was so darn cute!
huan yue
2006-01-04
ch 1,
abuseSuch a tease. Could this really only be a one-shot? I liked your characterization of Youji... I mean you avoided the Youji stereotypes and I really liked that because he still felt like himself. I love this pairing and it's nice to see them approach each other with a lot more subtetly. Really nice.
Elster
2005-12-17
ch 1,
abuseNo, not crappy at all, but really sweet!
You made me happy ^_^°
bye bye,
Elster

PS: Ayreon's great!
Misster. K
2005-12-14
ch 1,
abuseaw god.
love it when yohji asked aya answered "two years...maybe more" gotta say its so Aya! ^^ lord really love the way you write it! ^^
keep writing. and indulging ur fans wif YohjixAya sweetness! hehe
coldserenity
2005-12-01
ch 1,
abuseaw thats adorable!
calen.kun
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is really sweet. There are so many getting-together stories that are absolutely over the top, but you did a nice job of steering clear of sap and sex. *love* It's so refreshing. They understand each other without having to explicitly state their feelings. *melts* I especially like that Aya realized before Yohji did.
Vampire Louis
2005-10-27
ch 1,
abuseOh I read this a while ago and forgot to review (silly me)! I really like the fact that Aya was actually pinning for Yohji longer than Yohji was pinning for Aya *chuckles*. That's very rarely done but it certainly pleases me when it is. Thanks for sharing the story!

VL
phoinos
2005-10-19
ch 1,
abuse*grins* I love it. You've got a really smooth writing style, and the story was cute and touching without being sappy. I think you also got the characters pretty much right. The only complaint I had was that it sounds like Aya was in the hospital for awhile (due to the extent of his injuries and the fact that the others went on a few missions without him) but you say something about it being only a few days. "The mission a few days ago" or something. Which is it? That threw me off a bit, but only for a second. Otherwise, it was well-written and flowed very well.

I really enjoyed how you ended it. This is perfect as a one-shot, but it could also be continued if you wanted to. Keep up the good work!

By the way, just to let you know in case you didn't, you've got your reviews set so that you're not allowing any anonymous reviews.
monkeylove
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abusegood job! keep writing more! ^_^
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