pls work on chapter flow it looks cut up and stuff

slugs have no shell and toads and frogs are the same thing i think

Serena/Gaara

ya know i can under stand random chapters,well i think it has to do with my IQ i like gaara/naruto,i like female naruto,i like dragons and foxes,and when i was seven my IQ was 164,but that was a long time ago,i don't have any thing to do well just irratate ,believe it,dattebayo.

Happy Valentine's Day! May your Valentine's Day be as beautiful as mine! If you can't tell i'm hyper over it being Valentine's Day!

Great story, keep writing. You said at the beginning that you weren't going to make Naruto short, but it sounds like you went back on what you wrote. I vote NaruHina and UsaGaara. Don't make it NaruGaara. Can't wait for the next chapter. Yes it was the random chapter you've written.

I Love The Story Plz Plz Update It Soon! P.S. Plz Plz put Hotaru/Saturn into the story as a good guy and as Naruto&Usagi friend and in Shadow!

I love this chapter! Girl POWER! Love the new hinata! feel a bit sorry for neji though... Keep goin!

Hey did you know that the name "Kabuto" is also a poison or poisonous plant that can heal you but also kill you? yup. good story.

dosu and zaku are sounds i know that much. i can't remember which sounds. inari is also a (some times a boy, girl, or twins with the same name) fox god of prosperity and some other things.

Can you tell me the timeline for this story. Or is there no timeline whatsoever. Because some part of your story suggest future events and some suggest past events. I was a bit confused on what's really going on here. Overall, It's a okay story. The way you writing it it's not consistent. Some parts have pretty good parts while the others just down right stupid or silly. Well, nice try.

I really like this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Is it to late to vote? Well I still give my vote.

Fox demon for Usa.

Summoning: Fox

Pairings:

Serena/Itachi(since you have Itachi as a good guy)

Naruto/Gaara(me love yaoi!)

But if the Naruto/Gaara doesn't win I'll still read this story. Also just to make sure you know chapter 10 and 11 are the same and the exam that they are taking is the Chuunin exams. Please don't get angry about me saying that.

Well I hope to read another chapter as soon as you can type up the next one.

I Love The Chapter:12 Plz Plz Update It Soon! P.S. I vote for Naruto/Hinata pairing!:) And I vote for Serena/Haku pairing! Plz Plz Put Hotaru/Saturn into the story as Serena's & Naruto Friend!:))

If you do make Hinata hot, sexy, and evil; then maybe you could put her with Naruto. Since most of the Naru/Hina are with a good Hinata. And the ultimate defiance of her father would be to "let the Byakugan get into the hands of another village," so is it possible to have her join the Shadow Village. And Yaoi just creeps me out. No offence.

update soon!