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Bringer Of Fears 2008-04-30 ch 16,	abuseGreat story so far, I loved the way in which you have combined both worlds, great work! I'm also really pleased about all the spotlight on Vincent too. Anyway I see that it was '06 that you last updated, please don't let this story die, I hope to see an update soon!
Shippo's Ramen 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseW00T! This story rocks! i've read it 5 times over and still want to read it! UPDATE SOON PLZ! p.s. i don't usually read fanfics more than once unless they are extremely good and even THAT is pretty rare! DON'T GIVE UP!
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-06-18 ch 16,	abuseUpdate soon!!
Inutashio 2007-06-03 ch 16,	abuseI hope that you'll update this soon, Its a REALLY good story ^.^
Eatsa Pizza 2007-03-23 ch 16, anon.	abuseCool storie! I love you! ^_^ I only have Final FantasyI Ds But I know a few things. To Cloud: COME ON!! If you had SEEN what Naraku did, You would not be on HIS side!
Writing Ninja 2007-01-29 ch 16,	abuseAlright, an update. pretty nice work on this chapter, keep up the good work:-)
Kikino 2007-01-06 ch 10,	abuseALRIGHT! Another great chapter read! I love this story. I was hoping the battle with Sesshomaru was going to be bigger, but oh well. Maybe there will be better ones, right? Sounds good to me! ^-^ The way this story is going, it might go on my favorites! I wonder what's going to happen about Naraku. Now that the gangs are friends and all, what will happen? I can't wait to find out! Well, I'll be reviewing 2 more times. Unless I feel I just HAVE to leave a review. It's good to be having the characters in their usual bodies. I was starting to get used to them in each other's bodies. I was REALLY difficult at first, but I created a method! YEAH-YUH! It was weird hearing Dead Bodies Everywhere by KoRn when it was the Sesshomaru battle sequence. It was kind of funny. Lol. Well, on with the story! I can't wait to read some more! Arigato! ^-^ Kikino
Kikino 2007-01-06 ch 6,	abuseGREAT CHAPTER! I loved the battle scenes. It was a good thing that Vincent got a tranquilizer before he went into the mansion. That's would have been bad, lol. "Holding out his arms in a 'bow to the mighty Vincent' pose." Lol. That's right! BOW TO THE MIGHTY VINCENT! HE'S BETTER THAN ALL OF YOU! Lol, I love Vincent. I liked the board games. Those were something, lol. I loved the Reno card. What position was Vincent in his picture? I can see him in a fighting position with his gun and in his Turk outfit. I can see it now...Lol. I'm glad you didn't have them shun him. I think I would have cried. Well, I'll be reviewing later, I guess. Thanks for writing an AWSOME story! I love it! Arigato! ^-^ Kikino
Kikino 2007-01-05 ch 3,	abuseI love how this is going! I'm loving this so much! AHAHAHA! Naraku...that LYING BASTARD! DAMN HIM!:( You want to know what's sick? My friend's cousin thinks Naraku is hott! GROSS! Or as Yuffie would say, "GROSSNESS!" Lol. Sick, right? Oh! I'm loving this so much! Well, I'll be reading chapter 4 now. I think I'll make waffles too. Yeah, I'll go make waffles, THEN read Chapter 4. How's that sound? Arigato! ^-^ Kikino
Kikino 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseI'M LOVING THIS! Okay, I'll try to not review to every chapter. That's what I usually do. If I review too much, go ahead and tell me and I'd be glad enough to tone it down a bit. I like it that Vincent gets most of the attenction, he's my favorite too! XD Is Sesshomaru going to be in this? Well, I guess I'll have to read and find out, right? Well, I've got a new story to be reading too! Yay! Well, I guess you'll be seeing me again. Laters. Thanks for writing such a creative story! Never would have guessed! Lol. Arigato! ^-^ Kikino
Legendary Kijin Angel 2006-12-27 ch 16,	abuseLoving the fic! XD Finally a crosover fanfic where Vinnie gets his due attention! He deserves it for being the most interesting member in Avalanche. Please in the name of all things good in Fanfiction do not let this fic die by not updating! DX THANKS AGAIN FOR WRITING THIS! ...And Yuffintines aren't that bad...
Lord Makura 2006-10-31 ch 16,	abuseto hell with out of character vincent he was really awesome like this chapter by the way!
Lord Makura 2006-10-31 ch 15,	abuseI found really sad..
Thunderstorm101 2006-10-29 ch 16,	abuseTo the mean/rude rabid Clotis: hey! Some of us actually like the pairing! Whether you want Cloris or Cloti, it's up to you. Personally, I like Cloti, because I am of the opinion that he loves Airis because of Zack's memories, but, to each their own. Please don't let jerky reviews from rabid fans put you off of what you want to do...in the end, it is your story, after all.
Sephirothh 2006-10-29 ch 16,	abuseHaha, I knew it, I knew it was mt. Hakurei! Anyhoo, interesting chapter, glad you FINALLY updated it...I had to skim through the last chapter real fast to remember what happened... Good chapter though.

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