 David Fishwick 2008-11-06 . chapter 16I enjoyed reading this. So thanks for writing and I liked the alternate world you made. |
 wiccanforever 2006-10-08 . chapter 16RATED R! |
 Dcrawford84 2006-03-18 . chapter 13Are you ever going to write anymore stories ? |
 Dcrawford84 2006-02-19 . chapter 15When are you going to post the next story because I was wondering if and when Inspector Sheridan will be in the story? |
 Dcrawford84 2006-02-07 . chapter 16When's the next story going to be posted? |
 Maricole 2006-01-25 . chapter 16Great, thank you, they are married at last! I hope this doesnt mean the end of the series of stories, I am sure there is still much to tell. I do love this alternate world you have created. |
 Mattlovelace 2006-01-24 . chapter 16 I have a suggestion. I think you should have Cole and Olivia's baby born on the first night of the Blue Moon. It could make the child more unique than it already will be. The Blue Moon's power is at its peak on the first night. Its just a thought. |
 Magic_Amethyst80 2006-01-19 . chapter 14 Nice to see that these two have finally married, but I'm surprised that the ceremonies were so big and elaborate. I was hoping you would avoid the beautiful wedding ceremony cliche in exchange for something much less formal.
Also I am a bit surprised that you have softened Cole's mother to the point of having her cry at Cole's wedding. |
 Maricole 2006-01-18 . chapter 14Married at last, how wonderful! I hope we are allowed a peek at their wedding celebrations, and also at their wedding night! |
 Dcrawford84 2006-01-18 . chapter 14I'm happy that there finally married and I hope you update again soon. |
 hmmm...thinking... 2006-01-16 . chapter 13 is there a phoebe in this story? i like it tho |
 - 2006-01-12 . chapter 13 Very good; I can't wait for the wedding. |
 quills& 2006-01-12 . chapter 12 suspenseful; nice chapter. |
 Maricole 2006-01-11 . chapter 13There is so little decent Charmed fan fic to read that another chapter of yours is always exiting. I am pleased they were able to rescue Cole from Idril in time, and look forward to reading about his actual wedding to Olivia. |
 ethereal girl 2006-01-08 . chapter 12I love Idrils character. She is somehow sweet with her crush on Cole but at the same time dangerous. Very cool to have Cole under a love spell ;) - I'd like to see that the Charmed Ones or at least Phoebe helps with his rescue. Pls. update soon. |