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LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-17 . chapter 40
Yays!! I love this fic! I love Isabel! Why is she such an easy character to write?
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-16 . chapter 32
Woot! Go Isabel! Girl power to the extreme!
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-16 . chapter 30
NOT SQUEE! TOTALLY NOT SQUEE! WHY, MATT, WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Even though I've already read this, I honestly don't remember how the whole Matt thing will turn out...but I can guess based on what I'd do...seriously, this fic rocks!
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-16 . chapter 24
SQUEE! Even though I know it won't show up as more than one, I just put 27 exclamation marks after the word "sqee", which I don't think is even a real word...just something my friend Mewtwo Shall Rule the World and I like to say when we're excited about something...
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-16 . chapter 21
I'm pretty sure I told you this already when I first read this fic, but I'm telling you again anyways. Normally when I read a GoT fic that's Post-Key and Ethan finds a new love, I absolutely hate it because it feels like he's betraying Rochelle. But what I love about this is that you've thought about that, and gave explanation for everything. And the strange thing is: I think I actually really like it. Ordinarily I'd ask you if I can use this idea in a fic, but I don't know how I'd use it without copying your idea completely (at least about the whole "Ethan gets with a girl from the past and they start a long line of Rochelles" thing...not necessarily that the girl is the Princess of France), so I'm not going to bother. Wow, this is a long review...I'll shut up and keep reading now, shall I?
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-07-16 . chapter 18
I got bored and decided to re-read all the fics on my favs list, so...here I am! I can't remember if I've ever told you how much I freaking love this fic or not, so I'll tell you now: I freaking love this fic so much that if my computer jumped off a cliff, I'd dive after it...okay, so maybe that's also partly because I'm madly in love with my computer and our children would be upset if he died, but hey...(in case you can't tell, I'm not serious about having kids with my computer...but I do love it) I'll just shut up now, shall I? I've had too much sugar today...time for more!
adventurous
2008-03-11 . chapter 46
Good chapter, and please don't leave so long before updating again!
lunalux
2008-03-09 . chapter 46
i read this such a long time ago- it's absolutely great! i wish you could update soon and i wanna tell you your writing is real pro!
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-03-08 . chapter 9
‘What kind of freak name does she have: Mariposa?’

Oh god, I love that line! I know that I've already reviewed practically this entire fic, but I feel I have to review chapters again if I love them so much!
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-03-08 . chapter 4
The only thing that sucks about rereading a fic is that you can't always review when you want to point something out. I don't know if I told you this the first time around (and I'm too lazy to check) but Neriah is the same age as Isabel. Cuz if you remember in The Dark when Neriah first came, and both Matt and Dillon offered to show her around the school, but Carter picked Isabel because she was in the same grade.

I hate that doesn't let us review more than once. If you hadn't guessed, that's the reason I'm not logged in. Anyway, I'll shut up...for now...
LLAMAS WILL RULE THE WORLD
2008-03-08 . chapter 46
If you'd like a new beta, I'm available. You can send me the chapters through a PM, I can edit them, and then send them back to you so you can post them. Great chapter, by the way, although I'm a bit confused now...I'm gonna go and reread the whole fic...I've got nothing better to do, anyway.
justjustice
2008-03-08 . chapter 46
omg thank you for updating i love this stroy and updated soon
TroublingAStar
2008-03-07 . chapter 46
Just one word for this: AWESOME!
x0xkatiex0x
2008-03-07 . chapter 46
its about time :)

but... i cant talk. i havent updated my own in nearly as long.
so thanks for inspiring me to at least find the rest of what i've written.

and good job and not giving up XD
xx
justjustice
2008-02-05 . chapter 24
nice but you should have put mor pov's
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