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| lirance 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseVery sad and sweet. The thought of Zaraki wandering around randomly killing people and shouting messages at them is hilarious in a dark way. I liked Keisuke- it's easy to sympathise with him. Yachiru is very well characterised, this is how I can imagine her sense of grief and loss. Thank you for posting this ^^ |
| Artificial Life Creator 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusethat was wonderful! everything was great! |
| Ash of Mine 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYou make me cries and cries and cries throughout the story...and smile in the end!! It's a wonderful story! ^o^ Thanks! |
| Water85 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuse-sobs- It was funny and it was sad, the last line tore me up! You're an incredible writer. |
| kimmi kitsune 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusei love the story and think it is a good representation of the yachiru kusajishi kenpachi zaraki relationship i cant wait for oyu to come out with the sequel and when you do could you please send it to me at Kimmi Kitsune Captains assistant 11th division combat squat 13 court guards |
| boXx 2007-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegawd, i wuz feelin' nostalgic.. read this fic almost one and a half years ago? yupp.. suddenly remembered this fic and decided to revisit it.. am hearing it with rja your guardian angel.. cryin' as i'm readin.. damn.. there ain't much zaraki/yachiru fics as awesome as this.. excellent stuff |
| Unsane Chibi 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuse*worships* This is awesome. |
| Scarlet Amaranth 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome ^o^ I was in tears while reading this (T_T) loved the part where Kenpachi sent his message through Keisuke. I even liked the OC's first person narrative. *favorites* |
| Sakura-chan 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseYou know, even though it's actually a happy ending, it makes me tear up all the same. Very beautiful piece. |
| Azamiko 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... |
| alliedoll 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseaww! so sad! |
| sniff 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so sad! |
| Angranse 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my god that's the coolest idea ever. I love the idea of Zaraki killing people just to get a message across to Yachiru - I can so imagine him doing that. I really like Keisuke as well, the poor guy. |
| NocturnalFerri 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseaw gee...that was really sad. Kinda scary to see how yachiru might turn out if kenpachi ever left her. I totally agree that she'd probably go a little psychopathic. keisuke's character was well done. I really liked the story. It kinda boggles my mind to think of the connections in it. So, yachiru killed kenpachi, kenpachi killed Keisuke. and the anger runs full circle from yachiru to kenpachi for dying and Keisuke to kenpachi for killing him. Complicated. Though, it makes me sad and makes me wonder if kenpachi knows that being a murderer sends you to hell and not soul society. I know it was probably for plot purposes, but its sad to think that yachiru and kenpachi might never meet up again. |
| vampirelf 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWow this was really great! I was highly amused by kid-Yachiru's room with the drawings and stuff. The commentary off of 4th squad was interesting too... I think it does a good job capturing how 4th squads might feel being so different from the shinigami. The way you depicted Zaraki and Yachiru were really on the dot too... very sad, amusing, and sweet all together. |