 slice-of-insanity 5/16/12 . chapter 1I had to reread the story before I finally realized that Yachiru is the new Kenpachi of the eleventh division.
And then I cried inside ;( Every time Yachiru sees that coat, she is going to remember how she got it.
Really pretty piece! The ending in particular really hits home. |
 magdilen 12/6/10 . chapter 1That was really interesting and well done. Yachiru's characterization was spot on. The only thing is, I find it hard to believe that any shinigami wouldn't know the names of all the taicho's in Seireitei. |
 letmeupme 11/19/10 . chapter 1Aww.
Bloodthirsty friendship and grisly messages aside, this made me feel all warm and cuddly. I think X] |
 n 9/8/10 . chapter 1 AAS |
 Bob Dole 1/30/10 . chapter 1 Pretty damn good. Glad I read it. I'd like to see a sequel, but I don't really know where you could go with something like that other than Zaraki's return... ah well, I guess I'll just be satisfied with this.
Thanks for writing.
Later days,
Bob Dole |
 TheInflictedFinger 1/21/10 . chapter 1OMFG hsgiushfjshfkj PLEASE a sequel PLEASE? ;_; Such a wonderful beautiful story and...and... this can't be the end? |
 Tannim Murphy 10/16/08 . chapter 1I think this is one of the true gems of the fandom. Excellent on all accounts; good characterization, good story flow, great plot elements, and fantastic ending. |
 lirance 7/8/08 . chapter 1Very sad and sweet. The thought of Zaraki wandering around randomly killing people and shouting messages at them is hilarious in a dark way. I liked Keisuke- it's easy to sympathise with him. Yachiru is very well characterised, this is how I can imagine her sense of grief and loss. Thank you for posting this |
 Artificial Life Creator 4/28/08 . chapter 1that was wonderful! everything was great! |
 Ash of Mine 4/9/08 . chapter 1You make me cries and cries and cries throughout the story...and smile in the end! It's a wonderful story! o
Thanks! |
 Water85 3/28/08 . chapter 1-sobs- It was funny and it was sad, the last line tore me up! You're an incredible writer. |
 kimmi kitsune 2/27/08 . chapter 1i love the story and think it is a good representation of the yachiru kusajishi kenpachi zaraki relationship i cant wait for oyu to come out with the sequel and when you do could you please send it to me at
Kimmi Kitsune
Captains assistant
11th division combat squat
13 court guards |
 boXx 11/17/07 . chapter 1 gawd, i wuz feelin' nostalgic.. read this fic almost one and a half years ago? yupp.. suddenly remembered this fic and decided to revisit it.. am hearing it with rja your guardian angel.. cryin' as i'm readin.. damn.. there ain't much zaraki/yachiru fics as awesome as this.. excellent stuff |
 Unsane Chibi 6/7/07 . chapter 1*worships*
This is awesome. |
 Scarlet Amaranth 4/1/07 . chapter 1That was awesome o I was in tears while reading this (T_T) loved the part where Kenpachi sent his message through Keisuke. I even liked the OC's first person narrative. *favorites* |