i loed this so much! it made me want to cry for Jen though... *Sobs* i also felt bad for davis but not as much because Takari is DESTINY!

Good, except that Digital World should be capitalized, and if you're going to use Japanese names (Jun, it's June in the dubbed), then use all Japanese names? o_o; Don't listen to me, I'm just a little nit-picky.. o_o;;

Lyra! How come u have to be so good at this and i have to stink?

hey cool song-fic!