I'd forgotten how beautifully you write. Well done, Eli-chan!

It was difficult to read at points because of the lack of spacing, but because of the poetic quality of the piece I also feel it should have no spacing.

Also in the phrase "Everyone is born alone and dies alone, the universal Sorrow once had said her through her eldest daughters’ voice." It should read "...Sorrow had once said TO her through her..." (obviously the "to" should not be in capitals, that was just to mark which word was missing).

I hope you're going to continue with this challenge and your other fics as well; you are a wonderful writer.

Hahahaha! Too fantastic! Your innuendos are insanely sexy but never over the top. Well done. ^_^

blue curtain: *snicker* Who knew you could be such a tease, dahling?

Snow has made me long for winter. The words you choose are always surprising and unusual and perfectly fitting. "Star embodied and walking among mortals"..."soon-melting gems"..."suspended in adoration"... your writing is always so well-crafted.

Oh my, chocolate/sacrifice has left me all melted and flustered. Delectable...

As usual, I'm late with my reviews. o.o; I'm sorry. ^_^ At least I'm not a week late, whee! xD And thanks for acknowledging me. *pokes beginning* For future reference, you might want to try "lightning" without the "e" in there. XD *is being a beta* xD Oh, and tell Arashi-chan I'm not replacing her. x3

I do like the idea of (expounding on) Mamoru having this communications and life-giving power. :3 And the repetition was not redundant (at least I don't think, otherwise I'd have told you to scrap the end. XD) I think it brought the point home. :3 Gah, beautiful symbolism and descriptions. @_@ I especially love the, "saucerful of secrets" line...*clings to it*

*pokes e-mail* Yupyup. I wrote the...er, dreaded scenes first to get them over with. *cringes* So now I have to go back and write the rest of the chapter, and make sure everything fits and flows the way it should. It took me forever to work up the courage to write those scenes, but I managed to get the point across without going into graphic detail. Go me! ^_^; *cough* Er, just kidding. XD This is a review for your story, so I should be going, "Whoo Eli-chan!" Hence, my next line, "Whoo Eli-chan!" xD

Good luck studying. ^^; Though I need a job, I don't have one. Meaning I stick to my computer like...a squid's suction cup or something. xP (Sorry, just saw Pirates. My mind is influenced by water things at the moment. xD) Meaning send anything else my way, but also to Arashi-chan. :3 You can't forget your old beta. x3 (Plus, killing curses hurt...o_@)

-Kara

Whoa. That was so amazingly beautiful and intense but made complete sense. There were so many layers to this story and it just all melded together perfectly. The phrase 'to give life' just caused my hair to rise on end because it was so enchanting...

Great job, update again soon!

Aw, that's so sweet! Very poetic. "And every rosebud is a promise and a saucerful of secrets." I love this line :)

Hugs to your beta from me and of course hugs to you too - what a fantastic drabble!

M... *tears streaming down cheeks* Kirei, na...

Babies. Mamoru and Usagi's babies. I hate babies, but it's so romantic, ne? *grins cheekily*

Beautiful style. Beautiful job NeoDiji's done... have you replaced me? I'd understand - I take five times as long a time and completely butcher your work. Not the way of a beta. More the way of a domineering co-writer sort...

*sniffle*

*bawls*

SO PRETTY! SO SAD! I DUN'WANNA BE REPLACED!

...at least, not in your heart. And as usual, this review has turned out to be about me! *snugs* I love you muchly, darlingest Creampuff. And forever it goes! *aims wand and incants killing curse at NeoDiji* I just don't want to admit she did a greater job than I ever will. I'm too much of a control-freak. ^^

Love! Tah!

Smoochies and kissums,

- Arashi-chan

P.S. The spreading the rosebud thing was really, really dirty-slash-kinky sounding. ^_~;;

Even better the second time I read it! Lovely job Eli-chan, I especially love the final phrase as it makes me laugh everytime I read it. ^_^ Update again soon!

*giggles* Squeebee! *ish highly amused* Lubbles, dearest, lubbles.

Have I told you how much I enjoyed these? LOTS! Look forward to more of your work - as always!

And hopefully I'll have some more of mine up this week depending on how slow work gets :)

FMA Yaoi Innuendo Mistress? Why, thank you. ;D *bows* And no problem. ^_^ I'll beta anything you want me to, so just send it my way. Ah, I see you changed the "adult(er)ated" word to "overwhelming." Very nice. It makes sense. x3

And see? You still get the bonus. ^_^

If I had to pick, though, I'd still say Part 2 was my favorite. But I still loved the conclusion to this trilogy of innuendo-ness. xD (Look at me, a beta, and making up words. Ah well. ^_^)

Poor (or lucky) shop assistant, depending on how you look at it. And I loved the ending. Usa's so devious sometimes. And Mamo loves it. XD

To reply to your comment for "Taking the Heat," you're right. I couldn't think of a proper conclusion since, like I said, Roy and Ed wouldn't cooperate about getting "together." x3 I guess I didn't think things through enough. T.T Their little talk couldn't get dragged out any longer, and they were both too stubborn for a kiss. So. Ed-rants are always amusing, and you know how I love to leave my readers with something to laugh over. ;D I needed to write something sappy, because U.S. is getting too dramatic for my usual tastes. And Roy's more prone to acting sappy than Edo. XD

And I only get dragged back to the SM fandom for your fics, Eli-chan. (Be honored!) But I'll try to expand my interests again. x3 I still want to write that crossover fic, though I want to finish my mpreg first. xD Otherwise my brain would shut down. o@;

...Shush. Don't say it. xP

-Kara

*laughs* NYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! >3 'Tis amusing... muchos amusing... and ebil. Because it wasn't longer.

...m, I think I've seen this one before. It amuses me to death, really. I lurbles it (how can I not?) and the innuendo. Yey!