This is better than the other fic I had reviewed from you. There's a blackhole that draws me in XD

but it was painful. My heart actually twisted as I read it.

The dialogue was confusing, but I understand your intention, and I think it's great that you put it like that. So don't ever, ever change it.

And one more thing - if you ever plan on writing sad fics, please give me a warning XD oh well, but if you give a warning it wouldn't be as good, would it? i thought this was really heart-wrenching, and i truly feel sad now.

'Your smile like heaven on the face of sin.'

I loved that line.

Good work :)

It's so sad, but I like it! I never knew Rukawa could actually care for someone and still be Rukawa ^^

this is so sad...a one-shot indeed.
more to come i hope. nice one! ; )