Lily. in this chapter in Emily Lily Potter's Owl results you named Lily Potter, Emily Claire instead of Lily Clair.

wow...I actually looked back at the fourth book and saw the signs...Your good...or maybe what you said made me look for it...dunno...but rock on!

interesting idea, some advice tho. you need to work on your formatting every time someone speaks it should be a new line not in the middle of a paragraph. And second more detail would be really nice. We have no idea how any of the characters feel about any of what is going on other then that good job.

Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.

OK you have captured my interest.

please start up this story again because i really want to know what happens, this story is

very intresting and has really caught my attention. it's one of those storys that keep you

guessing and i hope that if you feel like it that you will update it soon.

Im going to be 100% honest here... i like this story it has a unique plot whitch i havent read before, your ideas are fresh and new and i can only come up with 1 critizism. I think you rushed the story it just all happens so fast. maybe if you review it and space it out a bit. for example the 1st meeting of neville and emily they both immediatly accept their feelings and they are together in the space of a 10 minute converstaion. I just think that aspect of the story could at least have been spaced out over a few meetings between them, maybe neville is shy and emily must fight for him and their relationship. But these are just my opinions as a said i like the story well done and just think over my suggestions. congrats:)

u souldnt give up on this its realy good

This story was confusing - the way you wrote it. If your writing has improved since this story, please come back and edit it, because it is definitely difficult to read. Please.

So difficult in fact, that I want to say that this story is ridiculous, but I'm trying to be nice. Honestly, the story line in great, just the way it is written and formatted.

This story needs defined spacing, much more details, so that it's not so fast-paced, and then the grammatical errors need to be corrected. The grammar could wait, as it is the least of this story's problem...do the other stuff first.

If you do not want to edit this story, then either take it off the site, or give it to someone else to correct and finish. The fact that it is not finished is of no concern to me, as none of my stories are finished yet, either.

JUST EDIT AND...UPDATE?

'The-Resident' has got to be blind if she/he (?) did not see ANY grammar or spelling errors through this entire story. Granted, there weren't as many as I HAVE seen in other fics, but I still saw several grammatical errors - I don't know about spelling, but you forgot many quotations, periods and even commas.

Good story, except for the grammatical errors and, of course, the paragraphs.

One thing I have to compliment you on is that you gave Harry an original name, rather than something like Harriet or Harietta. A name that can't be broken off to 'Harry', and doesn't start of an 'H'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT!

Will you write more please!

HEY! This is great, keep up the great work!

I find the whole idea unique and I applaud you for coming up with something new. I also applaud the fact that, while reading this story, I didn't notice a single spelling/gramar/punctuation error. Kudos. About the only non-OTT comment I have is that I felt the pace of the story was a little fast. I thought there were a number of scenes that could have been enlarged upon. Anyway, I enjoyed the story and have put it on alert so I don't miss a single chapter. Keep up the good work.

very good hope that u continue this story

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