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mj0621 2007-02-10 ch 9,	abuseswoon! updates! i love the updates! can't wait for the next (squeals) anyway, im up to a sequel if theres MORE fluff (wink) lol you're welcome btw. ;D -mj(wgf)
mags 2007-02-09 ch 7, anon.	abusehey just wanted to say i really like this story don't mind what that other fool said if he doesn't like the story well he should just stop reading it it is also called fiction things don't have to be the same as reality mags
mj0621 2007-02-08 ch 6,	abusewell all i can say is keep em coming ;) -mj(wgf)
Y HERRO THAR 2007-02-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseI'm not usually one to do this, but in this case, I feel it's necessary. This is not a very good fic. And by that I mean, the plot, the OC and your total disregard for spelling and grammar. First of all, it's illegal to bring just anyone along to a crime scene and allow them past the police tape. It doesn't matter if she's someone who IS authorized's niece. She can't be there and someone like Mac wouldn't risk his job for nothing. Second, it's illegal to bring an unauthorized person to an interogation. Don't think I'm done there, I'm just getting started. She's 17. She doesn't need a babysitter. She's needs a life When you give a character the appearence of a goth druggie, you don't make them a sweet little 'I'm gonna go play with woodland creatures!' attitude. Her appearence is saying she's a crack **/goth while her personality is saying she's either a preppy 15 year old or 7. The spelling of her name is just annoying and you probably didn't realize 'Dannii' would be pronounced 'Dan-ee-ee.' It's like Hawaii. If that's not enough, you can't even take the time to edit. It pains me to see this. If it was just the plot and character I didn't like, I probably wouldn't have written any of this. Then I just wouldn't like the story, in which case, I'd just go on and read another. But by not taking 20 seconds to hit spellcheck, you're saying you don't care. You don't care about the story and you don't care about yourself as a writer. It's not hard to do. Quotation marks ("") around quotes (what the characters are saying), the first word in quotations is capitalized. The 'uncle' in Uncle Mac is capitalized. And grammar, you just need to check with your 5th grade English teacher. This isn't a chat speak site. This is a site where you post stories. And like published stories, proper spelling and grammar is expected. The occasional typo is fine, but with you it's constant. Please take this into consideration.
snowbear96 2007-02-06 ch 6,	abuseYayz!! :D
snowbear96 2007-02-06 ch 5,	abuseSque that was great :) could you capitalise CSI instead of just putting csi? hug
snowbear96 2007-02-05 ch 4,	abuseOh I'm enjoying this :) thanks for pointing me at it. Isn't there a bit of an age difference between Dannii and Flack though? Or is it just a crush?
mj0621 2007-01-11 ch 5,	abusetold ya id be waiting for this :D ;) glad ya updated and im still waiting for that continuation lol ^_^ -mj(wgf)
mj0621 2006-12-20 ch 4,	abuseplease continue...:D -mj(wgf)
a nonny moose 2006-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abuse"Mac was stood at the arrivals..." You lost me right there. It is either "Mac was standing..." or "Mac stood..."
mj0621 2006-10-25 ch 3,	abusesquee! that was so cute! :D keep 'em comin'! I'll be here waitin' promise! -mj(wgf)
TiredOfAuthorsWhoDon'tCare 2006-10-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseDarn. Guess the computer didn't like those brackets. I was speaking of the Shift key.
TiredOfAuthorsWhoDon'tCare 2006-10-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseExcuse me, but have you even heard of utilizing a key? It would be nice if you'd take a moment and use the correct punctuation. It takes just as much effort to use the incorrect quotation as it does the correct one. As it is displayed now, your story is very difficult to read and the lack of correct punctuation/grammar gives you the appearance that you haven't even completed your Elementary education. You have an interesting story going here...take pride in the effort you are putting forth by making it correct. And for your information, Chicagoans pretty much sound exactly like Gary does in the show. Typical flat Midwestern accent.
Princess-Leasel 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abusel
Rakel-101 2006-06-29 ch 2,	abuseaw! Mac as an uncle!

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