I love it. Keep up the good work.

wow... that was so sad! i almost teared up. brittany m'dear, your writing is wonderful.

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if there's such thing as a perfectly written tear jerker...you have mastered it!! and gone way beyond.

I really liked this. So sad and yet so beautiful!

Okay, well, before I review, just to tell you, the URL you gave on FP is wrong, but you can change it. :D

I think your story was really sweet and I realy liked this:
'Wasn’t it better to worship the broken pieces of true love, than to have something second best? He would take the ruins of the best thing over the perfection of anything else.''
It just has so much meaning and depth! :D

You really managed to get the feeling of heartbreak in through your descriptive words. I love the way you also sort of made the world stop while he was crying and stuff. The ending was also really mysterious. Great job!!

sniff ,sniff!
hm, that was really sad!
so you are going to update mos soon!??!
now i am grining from ear too ear!:D
i had never read this story of yours, so i thought why not?!
and it was kind of nice and at the same time heartbreaking :)But as i said nice!

thanks :D

*cries*