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DreamBeamz
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Sad in a way. If only there was love.
Labyrnith
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
Amazing! It was so short but powerful with an almost incomprehensible meaning. Absolutely loved it. This pairing is indeed one of the best(it has a certain feel to it, with I totally feel addicted to...), I can't help falling for it more with the help of your works. =)
obsessmuch
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
God, that was good! I've been wanting to read your stuff for a while, but for some reason this is the first time I've got round to it! This did so not dissappoint! Bravo!
Kimmi
2007-04-17 . chapter 1
Dearest writer,
Lovely, simply lovely.

Luck,
Kimmi
the Icelandic sheep
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
This was sad :( But I liked it anyway :)
Scarlett O'Hara
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
Yeah, good, but, um, if they hate each other, why are they together? I really think that that needs to be explained,
minstrel_91
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
Oh my god, that was beautiful! So well put. And very in-character. I'd like to know how exactly they got into this situation, though. Maybe that could be another fic?
Nunchi
2005-11-01 . chapter 1
sad... but not all things are possible, is it?
Sarah
2005-10-31 . chapter 1
very cool! i really liked the last sentence, "...wishing they couldn't see through to something she scarely thought mattered." i think it nicely sums up the whole point and is a great way to end it. short and sweet! wonderful!
~Sarah
madam-malicia
2005-10-24 . chapter 1
You continue to amaze me with your ability to write a whole lot of story in not many words. I especially loved the wistfulness on both sides. Being greedy I want to ask for more but it is quite fine just the way it is.
prin69
2005-10-24 . chapter 1
wow. this is amazing
the-bird-flies
2005-10-23 . chapter 1
I absolutely adore your writing. It makes my jaw drop every time I read your stuff because it is just SO GOOD. *bows* I am always amazed by you, oh mighty Penniless.

TBF
mrs skywalker
2005-10-21 . chapter 1
so confused. ok, is this a play, or is it some kinda slavery thing. u really need to explain more in next chapter. i did really want to know what is going on by the summary, it was good.
hotskittles
2005-10-21 . chapter 1
liking it...plz cntnu
Sailor Tiamat
2005-10-21 . chapter 1
Very cool fic. The characterization of the "couple" is very well done.
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