 Promise Keeper 2005-10-22 . chapter 1I must have squealed five or six times during the course of this fic. It was just so cute and sweet and everything that light and fluffy fics should be. Kyou's inner monologue was fantastically done and his irratation was right on. You get used to a person acting one way and when they suddenly change, things don't feel right, even if how they used to act was a bit annoying. It was a wonderful idea for a plot and you carried it out to it's full potential without going overboard or OOC. And he called her "my Kagura"! Excellent job with this!
I run Neko Ino, a Kyou and Kagura fanworks site, and I would love it if you would consider allowing me to host this fic there. You can check it out at nekoino dot forever-rain dot com, which is also where you can find my email address. Whatever your answer, thank you for writing this great story (which was just what I was in the mood to read today) and I hope you dabble in the KK fandom again. |