Okay... I got lazy about two chapters ago and didn't review, I apologise.

O.O that was an unexpected anding, it was good, just unexpected. X3 I LOVED IT!!

Wow, you got me to tear up on that chapter. NICE JOB!! Now I have think happy thoughts for a bit...

Other then that, this chapter was awesome.

Hmm... All in all, a very fun chapter. X3 Naru-chan's so cute when **.

Wow, Neji actually does care, surprizing.

Hte only thing I can criticise, is that there are a few very minor typos. THat's it... s'all I got...

X3 The first Sasuk,e is really cute. The one at the end there, not so much; he's scary...

WHOOT!! Naru-chan's so cute!! X3 He'd hate me for saying that, but I don't care!

Poor Sasuke, Security pulled him off too soon... ;3

THIS IS SO CUTE!! Strange and a little out in left field, but I like that kind of story. :3

Fallen Star luved the story! ^^ Fallen Star thinks it was great!! ^^ Fallen Star says bye for now! *fallen star speaks in third person! ^^*

"I will even draw eyes on it and anything..." xD God,i would love to see Sasuke kissind passionately with his hand xD

I kinda miss the kyuubi representation, that would have been an interesting convolution.

WOW... One word to describe it. The drama, intensity and emotions all surrounded me!! Everything is so... REAL! Never have a read a story have I felt this way. I felt something in my heart whenever I read a part between Sasuke and naruto. I like it...


And with the way you write it, it made the whole situation more realistic, emotional and how you made everything connect together like some sort of puzzle. Good job on this one. And I would like to ask a favor.


Would you do a sequel for this? Please? I want to know about Sasuke and Naruto's love. Naruto resigned, what happened after that? Will they see each other again? PLEASE I'm addicted to this story. May you write more! Good job!

update soon

God, it had been so long from the last update that I had forgotten the whole fic... xD Thx for the UD, i hope you'll UD ASAP... thx...

The song lyrics has absolutely nothing to do with your fic... It's just a way to tell you that I was here and that I loved your story...
... just song lyrics, don't mind me...

Mama please stop cryin'
I can't stand the sound
Your pain is painful
and it's tearin' me down

I hear glasses breaking
As I sit up in my bed
I told god you didn't mean
Those nasty things you said
You fight about money
about me and my brother
And this I come home to
This is my shelter

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
You'll see, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it has done my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

Daddy please stop yellin'
I can't stand the sound
Make mama stop cryin'
'Cause I need you around
My mama she loves you
No matter what she says it's true
I know that she hurts you
But remember I love you too!

I ran away today, ran from the noise
Ran away (ran away)
Don't wanna go back to that place
But don't have no choice, no way

It ain't easy, growin' up in World War 3
Never knowin' what love could be
But I've seen, I don't want love to destroy me
Like it did my family

Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Mommy I'll do anything
Can we work it out?
Can we be a family?
I promise I'll be better
Daddy please don't leave

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
and act like it Comes naturally
I don't wanna have to split the holidays
I don't want two addresses
I don't want a stepbrother anyways
And I don't want my mom to have to change her last name

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend,
act like goes naturally

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
Let's play pretend, act like it
Comes naturally
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be better)
(mom ill do anything)
(can we work it out)
(can we be a family)
(promise ill be betta)
(dady please dont leave)

In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that
In our family portrait
We look pretty happy
We look pretty normal
let's go back to that

Daddy don't leave... daddy don't leave
Daddy don't leave
turn around please
remember that the night you left you
took my shining star?
daddy dont...daddy dont leave
daddy dont leave
dont leave us here alone

Mom l'll be nicer
I'll be so much better
I'll tell my brother
I won't spill the milk at dinner
I'll be so much better
I'll do everything right
I'll be your little girl forever
I'll go to sleep at night

I looked at your first chapter then your last without the in between ones, and your writing grew a lot, the first chapter is all about dialogue and toward the end it started to get more detaily but there was still to much dialogue in it, it gets overwhelming sometimes.

Ah, is there more? I liked it, but I feel it wasn't completed.

OH MY GOODNESS! I've only read the first chapter and I'm freaking excited! Haha, Sasuke is too good in this.

great story is there a sequal?