Hi !!
The begining was so sad and the end so spectacular, you described the sex scene perfectly !!
So great job
Megara1

wow that was sadand hot and heavy and i liked it ;) not to much not to little :P

Oh my... I started off so sad for their pain, and then ended up so happy for them - great ending to the series, SMK!

That was darker than the other stories, but I liked it. Life's not always rosy and you've worked that out beautifully.