I love this new story about Astrid. I see that you wrote it several years ago. I hope that you will write more Astrid/Vader stories in the present time.

--Lilith Kayden

I love this...are you gonna update this or astrid sometime soon? Please?

Love it!!

Great chapter! Keep on rocking!

I absolutely LOVE Astrid and her relationship with Vader. I like it how he ruffles her hair and she calls him dad. It totally rocks, dude! Keep up the chapters, i love what you've done!!

Good update. I'm surprised that Lord Vader allows Astrid to call him "dad", I would have thought he would insisted on the more formal title of "father." This is really cute though, especially the ruffling of Astrid's hair.

Update this and the other one and I'll be happy.

I think Lord Vader has met his match!
The line about aggressive negotiations and proof of paternity were priceless!

I desperately need more of this! Such a col fic! It's really, absolutely great! I love Astrid! And Vader of course. Make it a series, a long one!

I liked it, but it could've used more humor.