Wow, I just spent literally two days reading this entire story! THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH GOOD TAKARI STORIES OUT THERE!
This was really cute, and thank you for writing it! I enjoyed having something to read. :)

I'm sure I'm gonna wake up at noon tomorrow just becuz I stayed up just to finish this in a single night, but luckily it's Sunday tomorrow.

Anyway, onto the main stuffs, 1st of all I'd like to say "THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE MOST BLOODY AWESOME FIC I'VE EVER READ!"

The characters were abit OC, but generally I'll give you 9/10 for the characters' characteristic and overalls.

You score 10 points more on the bit Sorato, I rarely came across Takari fics that contain Takari & Sorato together. Usually all I see were Takari & Taisora or Takari & Mimato.Both of the latter pairings annoyed me a bit but more importantly, Takeru and Hikari MUST be the main roles.

Despite the fact I was half-asleep reading...just like you said in the A/N...I spotted lots of mistakes, especially spelling mistakes. I assumed you type during your drowsy mood is on O.o?

Too bad there's no sequel and all but I see no point in adding one anyway. For the Remake ver. I'm not sure If I'm gonna follow it but I know it'd be a marvelous fic as well.

PS: This must be the longest review I ever wrote. XP

Great climax and follow ups! The beginning was good too!

i just read this whole fanfic and i think it's good :)
great job!

sigh...i wish this story was longer...

this was a great story, i normally like action stories but, basketball is my faviroite sport. i found the story interesting and i loved chapter 5. you are a great author, i have not read many fanfictions but i have to say you are the best. thankyou for writng a really great story i enjoyed it alot.

Hey, i read this story, and I guess I caught it by complete luck since you did that rather odd update on it. I liked it really, I did. Aside from all the minor mistakes in it, it was an enjoyable read. Maybe I'll get around to reading some of your other works.

On a critical note, I hope that the one year gap in your writing has helped you improve on grammar and usage. Not to be mean or anything, but there were times that I had some trouble figuring out what some of the sentences you wrote meant, so yeah.

Good luck with the writing, and maybe you might want to check out my Takari fic when I post it. Thanks for the story a good read. And I may check out the edited version of this story, who knows?

... how will THAT prove he's a gentleman?

you're re-doing it all?
Always loved this fic heaps, from the day you started it
Melbourne? NEIGHBOUR! I'm up in Sydney LOL!
Good luck with the re-write

Sounds good - but I won't be reviewing much (seeing as I'll be too lazy to log in or review). :-)

FANTASTIC STORY!
I LOVED THE PLOT AND WRITING
KEEP IT UP!

I remember reading this last year. Looking forward to it! :-)

Yo. *Waves*

i remember e-mailing you for every chapter instead of revewing!! Hahahahahahaha!
Keep writting!! was what i would say! I've missed ure intence writting skillage! So i'm REALYL looking forward to you re-writting this story!! XD
just dont change to much, cause the plot is AWESOME!
Damn, i must have read this story over like 10 times!

x
Aishiteru
Chimo-Ja-ne
Sincerelly
TaKari Girl 101 [Aka: A HARDCORE FAN!]

Very ironically, my former nickname is Crystal and it feels very awkward to read it.

you are amazing!