I'm stunned at how perfect this was. Not because you're not a good writer, but because it's such an original concept and so effortlessly and flawlessly written.


Epic love for Kathy's observations about Tony and musing about the relationships between the team, especially the 'he is pain and anger held together by skin and a nice suit', and also 'they are touching as if holding each other together'.

Oh, and the contrast between Kathy's mother's slow, painful, patient death and Kate's quick and brutal murder was... I want to say lovely, but it's probably closer to heart-wrenching. Or a combination of the two.

If I listed all the parts I loved, I'd have to copy and paste pretty much the whole story. Thanks ever so much for sharing.

An absolutely lovely look at Tony through someone else's eyes. Someone who doesn't know him, who isn't sure who is he and what he might be lying about -- but who knows him just the same. I love Sequitur's voice, her way with words. Her ability to get inside a character's head and reveal his innermost self. Brilliant!

wow, that was...just wow. I don't even know how to convey how powerful your story was, you truly are talented. In all the post-twilight stories I've read so far, yours was definitely the most unique, it was raw emotion without being emotional, if that even makes sense. I don't know how else to explain it, there just aren't any words that I can pull from my vocabulary that can justly describe your story, it was incredible.

Beautiful. It's not much else I can say other than I love it.

Neat.

very much liked oc pov

Fantastic story, and very much in character for Tony, I can see him doing this on the flight home

This was so very moving. It was raw and real and so very Tony. I really enjoyed it very much and it was incredibly well written. You are a very talented writer indeed.

~Thalia013

Oh wow... That's so sad, and completely incredible. Poor Tony. Amazing writing though. Loved it.

I felt so in tune with the narrator that it was uncanny and still I was bleeding for Tony. What a brilliant writer you are!

A great story. I liked that you told it from the stewardess's point of view.

Ok, this one's different. A lot. Liked it. A lot. You can pull off second-person narration very well and I actually think that it suits this story better than a first-person narration. Same goes for narrating in the present tense, which is often times rather annoying to read. Just... very well done! Kudos!

WOW! that was amazing! so powerful!

What a subtle, moving and insightful story. I have just seen the episodes following Kate's death, and the flip nature of the guys' fantasies about her did not ring true at all. Your bittersweet way of presenting two private griefs was infinitely more genuine, painfully touching and honest. Thank you! jm

I just lovedthe perspective on this story. Interesting and so different.

Pam