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| TamSibling 2007-08-16 ch 8,  | abuseThis is heart-breaking! I'm just glad Paya didn't really die. Is there any chance of a sequel or have you already written one and I just don't know it? I really loved how you portrayed Kara and Lee here. |
| Silwyna 2006-09-01 ch 8, | abuseThis story was great. The three were such a sweet family. I loved the ending. How Paya/Allie asks for spaghetti and rememberes Lee and Kara in her dreams. I'm off to read the sequel now. I can't wait to find out how the story continues. |
| Hell-of-Fire 2006-02-19 ch 8, | abuseGod, now I have tears in my eyes! You sure this was your first fanfic?! I'm impressed! A really good story, touching, consistent, just great! Thanks a lot for writing it! |
| Nytel 2005-11-26 ch 8, | abuseThat wasn't the end that I was expecting, but I still liked it. You did a great job with this story! :) |
| Nytel 2005-11-26 ch 7, | abuseVery intriguing, I love it! |
| Nytel 2005-11-26 ch 6, | abuseOh, exciting! I'm off to read the next chapter. |
| Nytel 2005-11-26 ch 5, | abuseI liked the turn of events in this chapter. |
| Nytel 2005-11-26 ch 4, | abuseSo interesting. |
| greensleeves104 2005-11-26 ch 8, | abuseAhh... what a good ending! Sad, poignant, and beautiful. Nice work! I really enjoyed the story. |
| SG1SamFan 2005-11-25 ch 8, | abuseNo! You can't just leave it like that! How are we to know what happens to Lee and Kara, or *where* Allie actually is, or most importantly, how a horde or frakking centurians got onto the frakking ship! Please, a sequel. I beg of you. I loved how you left the ending open, but as I was reading the last chapter it seemed like there were parts missing, days or hours that seemed important and were left out, leaving me a tad confused until I got my bearings. And the end seemed a bit rushed, as if it wasn't really an end at all, just an opening to another chapter. Will Kara and Lee ever see Paya again? They had found peace and started to become a family, and as much as I liked how you kept the angst factor like it is in the show towards the end, it's not fair to just tear that peace away from them, is it? I loved this story and hope to see more from you, perhaps a sequel reiterating what happened in chapter 8 and continuing the story. I mean, how did they fake her death? What would have made her look dead to the cylons but kept her alive? And how were the cylons neutralized once they were inside? You left a lot of unanswered questions, and I hope that means you're open to a sequel. You should feel proud that your writing is good enough to reel me in like it has. Thanks for a gripping story! Emily ; ) |
| Tracyj23 2005-11-25 ch 8, | abuseGreat story. I love the open ending. Poor Kara and Lee. I'll use my imagination and assume they live happily ever after. (as if it would ever come to that) I've enjoyed reading this story - thanks! |
| lynnmichelle 2005-11-24 ch 6, | abuseThere were some really touching moments in this - nicely written. |
| CCl4 2005-11-22 ch 6, | abuseI was just thinking about this story. I am glad to see new chapters coming. This is good stuff. |
| midnightair 2005-11-21 ch 6, | abusei love this chapter..it was worth the wait even if i really hate waiting! please updte soon! |
| greensleeves104 2005-11-12 ch 5, | abuseI'm really enjoying your story! I like that you made Paya psychic, and that you had Kara save Lee. That was a very dramatic scene with the Viper racing towards the Raider. Yikes! Good writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |