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| TygerMoon Foxx 2006-06-12 ch 11,  | abuseNice twist! I want to smack some sense into both detectives, they're so obtuse. |
| TygerMoon Foxx 2006-06-12 ch 8, | abuseI really got a good laugh out of reading this one. Starting the poll is a classic Trivette action. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. |
| Onlyaman 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseHi Racergirl, suspense is not killing me yet, but this is a good start. I will shurely go on. I just want to go into details about some of the things you wrote. In the first sentence you write: "...as is slowed to a stop." Should that not rather be "as it slowed..."?? "Mel is planning on giving Momma an another heart attack when..." this was a good one!! I love that kind of humor. "and Chris are growing like a weed..." would that not be: "is growing like a weed..."?? In the last two sentences you switch from past to present tense. If I have mentioned anything though it is right, please note that I am german and may be not as good at english, as you are. ;-) Have a good time and go on writing. Onlyaman |
| WAM-GSR-JavaJunkie 2005-12-08 ch 17, | abuseAww. That was such a great story. And they had a girl. And they named her after her great-grandmothers, how sweet. I really hope you write more soon. This was an AWESOME story and I really do hope you write more b/c I like the way you write. And of course it was a GREAT chapter. |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-08 ch 17, | abuseGood ending. Enjoyed the story and look forward to others. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-06 ch 16, | abuseGood chapter. Where was Sydney, though? Maybe with Alex, comforting her? Look forward to more soon. Audra |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-06 ch 15, | abuseGood chapter. Hope they find Angela soon. |
| WAM-GSR-JavaJunkie 2005-12-06 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapter. I really can't wait for the next one b/c I want to know if it's a boy or girl. lol. I'm glad they found Angela and I'm glad she's okay. Really can't wait to read more. |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-04 ch 14, | abuseGreat chapter. That guy's one sick puppy. Hope Walker and the others find Angela soon and give Tim what's coming to him. Look for more soon. Audra |
| WAM-GSR-JavaJunkie 2005-12-04 ch 14, | abuseOnce again great chapter. this story is getting really good. can't wait to read more. and thanks for updating so quick. it's great. |
| Beautiful7lovely 2005-12-04 ch 14, | abuseHey Keep up the good work! can't wait to read more |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-03 ch 13, | abuseGood chapter. So we know who has Angela, have some idea about why he grabbed her, but do the other Rangers have a clue about him and the fact that he's not in jail? Look for more soon. Hope the others get Angela out before she has the baby. Audra |
| WAM-GSR-JavaJunkie 2005-12-03 ch 13, | abuseI really hope Michael and the rangers find Angela soon. I really can't wait to read more. Update soon. This is a great story/chapter and I want to read more. Please. |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-02 ch 12, | abuseGood chapters. Hope they find Angela safely soon. They've got to get her back before the baby's born, at least. Look for more soon. Audra |
| Beautiful7lovely 2005-12-02 ch 12, | abuseThis is a great story, I just hope Angela is ok. That guy that was stalking her kiddnapped her i bet. What are you going to name the baby? If its a girl you should name her elliana sydney gage or if it is a boy james cordell gage. Not that i care if you name them that just giving you an idea. bye |