“I’m sorry Finny! I’m sorry! I wanted to break your leg, but my love for you stopped me. I love you! I LOVE YOU!”

Finny grinned at him. “I love you too pal. Let’s go to San Francisco.”

AHAHAHA! finny would so respond with something like that!

I...don't even know what to think.

Hahahhahaha.

that's me
ahhelga
aka Pauline

BRILLIANT!

Very nice. This would definately make a great cartoon.

Wow. Nova-chan suggested this story to me and I really think this is a great piece. It's like A Separate Peace summed up in two seconds. Except for the San Francisco part. Ths hilarity of it is great though. I think it would make a great cartoon series.

Lmao I dont know whats going on! But its so Funny! Continue!

OMG, this was the most hilarimous thing I've ever read!

Oh My. You don't know how relieved it makes me feel to find out that my friend and I aren't the only people to notice these rather strange comments to be leaving a young mans mouth. It took me a few days longer to read those books after I found at least three odd comments about Brinker's behind, and Finny and Gene being "definately please" While wrestling. It makes me so happy to know I wasn't the only one.

HAHA this stories great for a laugh keep it up

I love it! You folks impress me more and more each time! More more more! Brinker Hadley is my home boy folks, and when you include him in your stories, it makes me proud to have picked such a wonderful hero. More please! Macaroni and cheese!

that was crazy! that was wild! that was funny! even though I asked myself "what!?" every five sentences nice work.

i'm laughing so hard at this because it's just a huge "WHAT THE FSCK WERE YOU GUYS SMOKING?!"

this is great, i'm seriously about to implode. congrats on taking an award winning, serious, horribly depressing book and making it into...this. ^_^

*laugh*
Cute!!

I love it! It certainly deserves recognition as one of the best stories of our time! Bravo!

The way you portrayed Phineas as an unstable and selfish youth and Brinker as a troublesome boy with a big butt is just amazing. I loved the little mermaid cameo. One more reason this deserves the Nobel Prize. If it goes un nominated, I will be sure to nominate it for an Oscar or maybe an Emmy. I just loved it! You go guys!

The-Writ has spoken!