This story was so beautiful. You went the extra mile to describe the conflict within Shadow's mind, and the result is this well-written masterpiece. Great job. I read this years ago, but I found it again. This will be on my favorites list... :D

~N.R.

great job platonic, it hit me right here (points to heart) great job (claps hands)

Do you have a bleak outlook on life or is that just Shadow?
JUST KIDDING! I know that's how he'd see it.
Very well written, especially the not running fast enough part. I really liked it.

That is deep, really deep. It hit me right here. I cryed! I love it.

This was a very well thought out and written story. Though there are a few spelling errors which you might want to fix(that were already fixed mind you;) Other than that beautiful. Keep writing.

Purr. You have pleased the Cat.