One of the best Peter Pan one-shots, really. It was beautiful. That simple sentence at the end was truly heartbreaking, and it really does make one feel so sad for Peter. He knows what he's missing, yet he doesn't, at the same time. Great writing, and good concept. I really liked it. I've been looking around for good Peter Pan fics all month (having read the book and watched the two movies -- particularly I liked the 2003 one the best because it was much more true to the book) and I'm glad I found this one. Bravo.

ohh i just read this story and i absolutely LOVED IT!! You really are a very talented author...

Aw.

Your fic was great. I've been wanting to read some Peter Pan fics since I read the book a couple of days ago.

well written. love it

AW! That's so sweet! This was such a nice story...CONTINUE PLEASE!

Aw! This is so good! So sad at the same time! Very well-written, one of the better one-shots I've read. GOOD JOB!

oh lord! so sad :'(
it is a really good piece of writing but real sad as you can tell i reackon you should of made it into a proper story like of how he might be able to get her bak...
but alas it's your story not mine but i fink it's great anyway!;D