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jagadeesanenator
2007-11-21 . chapter 23
I really like this tory but I have a few quetions. Did Blanche give birth to Scar's cubs yet? ANd thats about it. It was a pleasure reading this.
Amalthea Daemon
2007-08-01 . chapter 1
AHH! A sequel and again I find it post-production! I suck...

Aw...so cute that Nala chose to combine the two names to be loyal to both partners. The name Athari is really beautiful.

Off to read and review the rest of the story!
MorpheusDreamer
2006-01-25 . chapter 23
Nice, a peaceful ending with Scar I's rather hollow statements transformed by his namesake.

(I still can't help feeling sorry for Kiara... so they kept her in the dark for so long and expect her to not even express a little surprise? Ach... who'd be a mother?)

Ahem, but apart from that a good story. Hope to see more!
kahllynn
2006-01-23 . chapter 23
Ah...and such harmony will now hopefully exist.
This was a lovely end - I especially liked Kiana's control of the situation clashing with Kiara's stupidity. Nalathari grew so wise...it must have been difficult to let go of everything.
There's one thing I'm still not quite sure of though - will Blanchè's cubs be heirs to the Pridelands, even though Kiana will be Queen?
I loved reading this story! I hope you shall work on another, because your work is easy to read and yet highyl intelligent and inspiring at the same time :)
Well done!!
SunRise19
2006-01-23 . chapter 23
Well done!! This was a very good story, I really enjoyed reading it!! All turned out in the end..i suspect that Kiara will come around to her son's mate. I especially loved how you wrote the ending, making the lines of the song be in the story..making the story come full-circle.great job!
MorpheusDreamer
2006-01-23 . chapter 22
And Kovu continues his course in ideal parenting with a brief paeon to accepting your children's decisions!

Meanwhile, I can't help feeling sorry for poor confused Kiara... I mean, we know it's alright, but to have your mate come home with an unknown female and discover that your son and daughter have both found unknown mates which Kovu doesn't want to talk about... what's a mother to think? No wonder she gets very little sleep...
kahllynn
2006-01-21 . chapter 22
oh, poor, stupid Kiara (Sorry, I hate her :D) she's upset, but she should be happy for Scar just like Kovu is! I really hope Scar is happy with Duchess, and I thikn the way that Kovu handled it was awesome!
But won't Blanchè have Scar's cub...the next King/Queen?! There's still so much that is unanswered! This is awesome, I love this story! Will there be another?
~kah
SunRise19
2006-01-21 . chapter 22
I really liked this chapter, especially the end of it. How you made Kiara muse over things in the dark as if saying, "I can't "see," or know what is out there or going to happen." very affective!
SunRise19
2006-01-19 . chapter 21
This was an interesting chapter, I'm glad to see Kovu took it so well! Hopefully his other sister can find a mate.
MorpheusDreamer
2006-01-19 . chapter 21
Oh I say Kovu, top marks for being an accepting and caring father! This scene was rather like a surreal version of coming out, and frankly I think Kovu handled it far better than many fathers would.

Shame for poor Blanché though, but also glad to see her so accepting... what will she do now I wonder?

Oh dear, and just when everything had calmed down for Kovu, he had to ask about Zarafa...
kahllynn
2006-01-18 . chapter 20
oh oh...how will Kovu react? Wow...
This is great! Your writing is awesome - I'm falling in love with Al more and more :) And poor Duchess! Exiled by Kofi, stuffed around by poor Scar (even though he doesn't mean it..) will the poor hyena ever have a break?!
And will Kovu ever see Zafara again? Will they ever see her? And Blanchè? Oh dear...there's so much I need to know!
*waits for the next with bated breath*
~kah
SunRise19
2006-01-16 . chapter 20
Oh my, just wait until Kovu finds out..I'm looking forward to seeing how you will pull this off!
MorpheusDreamer
2006-01-16 . chapter 20
And so it looks like Scar and Duchess have a future after all... let's just hope that Blanché can accept this...

Goodness me, but Kovu's going to have a lot to get used to once this whole situation is explained to him...

(But nice to see him, almost forgotten about the canon characters!)
kahllynn
2006-01-15 . chapter 19
aw...gosh, this is amazing...th story just keeps on getting better...poor Duchess...:(
SunRise19
2006-01-13 . chapter 19
I feel for Duchess in this chapter..she wishes to be all to Scar but she can not.although i've never been in her situation..i know what it's like to feel jealousy towards my then ex-boyfriend's ex-girlfriend..me and the boyfriend are back together now..*clears throat* I'm sorry for this perhaps may have been to personal..this was a good chapter, wonderful job!
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