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marora
2009-07-28 . chapter 4
I liked this chapter better than the others, it felt smoother. I realize you must have spend some time choosing the tittle for this story; this deals with past lives which is akin to Karma in Indian folklore.
marora
2009-07-28 . chapter 3
I'm surprised Integra's extended family didn't run up and hug her. In most Indian family reunions, the guest is treated like a long lost friend and people are rarely standofish.
You know the cutlure though, Marigolds are a welcoming flower.
marora
2009-07-28 . chapter 2
I like how you focus on the different senses instead of just concentrating on sight. However I doubt that a londoner would be surprised by the bustle of city life in India. Maybe the colors, but London is as busy as New York.
marora
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Although your writing is amazing, I'd like to suggest a dissodence between waking up and her dream. Perhaps a period of confusion where she's not sure where she is?

Nicely done, I like the foreshadowing. And sending Integra to Bangalore is a nice idea, haven't seen that done before.
Katherine Silverhair
2008-12-29 . chapter 4
What an interesting story. Well-written and thoughtful... It appears to have been a long time since this was last updated, but I'm interested in the outcome
Regards,
K.S.
quickyfant
2008-11-04 . chapter 4
Hi! Its me again! I am reading all your Hellsing stories, specially the AxI ones I love them!! I wanted to know if I could have a look for the rest of this fabulous story of yours? Thanks!
DemonicPelicans
2008-04-25 . chapter 4
Wonderful job! Very intrigued as to what will happen next! Can't wait to read the rest! :D
Hermonthis
2007-11-05 . chapter 4
Thess, this is such a unique look at AxI! The tone is different, more sensual, more lush, and the environment is as much a part of the story as the characters are themselves.

I do hope you finish this fic.
Different Child
2007-10-31 . chapter 4
Hey! I really like this! It's quite interesting!!
Kurosu
2007-08-31 . chapter 4
Argh, I was really enjoying it.. till I found out.. it's to be continued.. *weeps*
Immortalis
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
Thess,
What a wonderful fanfiction. Yummy. I love it! I love it!
chocolate-chandelier
2006-10-01 . chapter 4
please update! Karma is so powerful and very different from all the AxI iv'e read. iv'e been following Karma since the first day it was posted...so, Please update ^__^ a lot of fans are dying
Abraxia
2006-09-03 . chapter 4
What a... no, can't find the right words.
just UPDATE, thessy xD
M_M
2006-08-10 . chapter 4
/fangirl mode/ Wah, please...I don't have an LJ account, please, please, please update this magnificent piece of art for us hungry, squeeing fangirls...or just ignore me, I've read too many badfic lately and I'm not thinking clear anymore. Or maybe it's because it is 2 am and I'm still up, rereading axi fics. endofmessage(read:shameless begging) /fangirl mode/
Dalia N'Shard
2006-07-01 . chapter 4
please tell me when you finish
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