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| Angel 2008-07-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseso confused. nothing made any sense! can you explain? |
| Moola Deena 2008-03-21 ch 6,  | abuseOkay, I must admit you got your WTF-reaction. Still it was interesting to read something a little different. ^^ Keep it up! |
| The StarWatcher 2007-03-22 ch 6, | abuseO_O Holy Sh1t! That was awesome! This whole thing is something you can consider a work of art! |
| Streetwise 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis site really doesn't want me to review. I'll try again. It was sad and disturbingly beautiful. Lovely imagery, and the usage of German gave it a nice atmosphere. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is so special; you did a perfect job of capturing it--both the frustrating distance between them and the deep friendship (or, as it is strongly hinted here, more). The ending was... bittersweet. Sad, but not overly so. Certainly not happy. Maybe the ending was simply more solemn than bittersweet? I don't know. I just loved it all so much. I enjoyed the format as well. Having to hit 'next' just gave a short moment of suspense. It was lovely. Line breaks wouldn't have done quite the same thing. And I have to say, this little story was quite the inspiration for me. A favorite for sure. |
| SailorZelda 2005-10-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseOh, man... *shudders* This was so surreal... very pretty, very creepy imagery. I have to say, though, I don't entirely get it... maybe that's just because it's midnight and I really should be awake instead of reading fanfiction, hah... Um, yeah. Nice job! ^-^ |
| martinique 2005-10-22 ch 6, | abuseI understand (or at least, I think I do) why you placed them in separate chapters, but I think paragraph breaks would have done. As another reviewer said, it was a relentless piece full of images and ideas that you couldn't quite touch on. As the other reviewer also said, it is a damn good piece of work, vague, disturbing, supernatural, mysterious but also very clear. Yeah, I definitely liked it. I'm not sure if I would've liked it as much if I didn't understand the german (which btw, you did a good job of, it is understandable even if it isn't always 100% native). Anyhow, enjoyable! |
| WolfBane2 2005-10-21 ch 6, | abuse...(staggers) The 6 seperate chapters weren't necessary; paragraph breaks would have done. But the images spun on and on without pity, making the reader cry helplessly after them to wait, just wait, please, let me catch up, I don't know what's going on. It fits under the "fabulous" category, though I'm not quite sure why. The unfinished sentences were a nice touch, gave it a feel of background. Excellent job. (gives author a taco. Wanders off) |
| Azamiko 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuse"Setzt euch bitte" Sie is formal you or they, ihr/euch (conjugated) is y'all... |
| kataru 2005-10-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseum.. you should place it all in one chapter.. each chapter was soo short... ..narusasu... XD XD |