... phew.

It took a while to get started. I admit that at first, I did feel a little off about Magus's characterization, and Alfador felt like maybe too much, and... I was wrong. I was wrong! *sob*

This fic has some weak spots, but overall, I can't help but think that this fic fulfills the goal of the writer completely... and brings the reader into the dream.

I'm leary of original characters, and have a problem with automatically hating them in a fanfic. ; You may have just cured me of this (although I suppose they aren't "original characters" per say.) Everyone, from Alfador to the Epoch, grew on me to the point that I got annoyed with the *ducks* somewhat boring Chrono Trigger characters and kept wanting more screen time for the dreams.

Now, I shall abandon this gushing review to go fuss at other people to read this fic. Huzzah!

...WOW.

I almost got peeved when I finished chapter 10... and then I got to the ending. I didn't like it, but I liked it... y'know?

Bittersweet, but wonderful all the same. Thanks for an awesome ride.

This series has such a peculiar effect on me... Tugs at the heart-strings, I guess would be a way to describe it. I think it's because of the way you switch from humor to tragedy in a heartbeat...

Marvelous chapter all around. I am, as usual, looking forward eagerly to the next. :)

Cool Story! I hope you write more sooon!

I still can't get used to the way you treat Magus, but then, I think both he and I have a habit of taking him too seriously. ;) Interesting as usual, and I'm afraid I can't think of much else to say, except that-obviously-I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow. Was it just my imagination, or does the end of this chapter scream "Chrono Cross"? n_n Excellent stuff. I wasn't at all confused by the first part of the chapter-it's pretty much clear who's saying every line. I would've liked to see the rest of that conversation between Schala and Magus... she sounded awfully interested about the whole "place that never was" concept... But oh well. Loved the ending, anxiously await more. :)

Poor Epoch. ;_; The middle of this chapter was a little confusing, but I think that was just because I wasn't expecting Epoch to crash. A good chapter all around... Magus's "13,000 years" line was very amusing... :) Looking forward to the next one, naturally!

Your characterization of Magus is a bit too flippant for my tastes, but I'll forgive you that... 'cos I absolutely can't get enough of those Dreams. XD

Cool get more out fast!

Thanks muchly, Pard _ And yay, plot! Can't wait (yet must -_-) to see where you're going. D

Phil

Great Story! I can't wait to see more!

Wow! This story is looking absolutly amazing- well written, and *highly* amusing. I think 'Tall, Dark, and Dumbfounded' will forever be seared into my mind as the key phrase for dear Magus . . . *laughs* Um . . . not much I can find wrong. A little confusing at times, the plot doesn't wander, but it does seem to pop up unexpextadly at times. . . oh, bother, that's not what I mean. Anyway, good story, continue on!