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| Gemarah 2008-04-27 ch 61, anon. | abuseI just read this all in like, 2 days. Sleep be darned. :D Ok, that was an amazing story, like seriously. I loved how you used stuff from the show and turned it into a story of your own. I loved how you connected everything, especially things that happened in Morality Bites, I thought that was really good. Extremely well-written. I loved all the characters. When I say all, I meant the men. I love the men. It's all about the men. Chris, Wyatt, Leo, Kyle, Jason, ...yeah, totally. They were written in a much more favorable light or so that's what I thought. Yeah... them womenfolk were annoying the frilly heck outta me. Seriously, the grown up women, especially Piper and Phoebe were so,...like, difficult to read at times. Jeezum Crowe. I liked Paige though. The younger girls...yeah, I don't like reading about preteens and all of that in situations such as the ones in your story 'cause they generally make idiotic decisions that make you feel like grinding teeth when reading about their annoying...ness. Except Harry Potter. But that's Harry Potter. :p Ok, anyway...I was a little thrown when I began reading about Kyle and Jason because of Henry and Coop but you must've started writing this when Jason and Kyle were the women's love interests? But I got used to them. Like them actually. I liked that you added humor in your story. Sometimes people write so you drown in the sorrow of their characters and their situations and it usually makes me stop reading but a little levity every now and then was refreshing here especially between Chris and Wyatt. :p I liked how you've written the villains. That it was not just the end of the world like how the show generally handled every baddie they came across but the end of everything. Seeing as how they're all older, a little bit more...just more was better than the usual, I suppose. Anyway, Good work on this. This is so now one of my favs. :) Now I'm gonna go crash. :D Pce. P.S. What was the other epilogue like?? |
| fractured sun 2008-04-26 ch 61, | abuseI really enjoyed this series, once I started I just had to read to the end, who needs sleep. |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-01-28 ch 10, | abuse*bangs head against wall repeatedly* Ok Piper is a super duper idiot Pheobe is kinda dumb...kinda really acutally Paige is ever so slightly DUMB Leo, Kyle, and Jason arent that dumb and it seem the children are far wiser than the parents except for Lynn i like Lynn shes frickin awseome lol LOVE the fic! |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abuselove this fic! |
| Cirolane 2007-12-02 ch 61, | abuseI've spent my whole week reading through this story and it's brilliant. You're really really good at this. You have so much talent and insight and this could make a really good episode or film. You're take on the characters is wonderful. Sometimes I got annoyed, in that 'why did she do that?'-way, not 'omg her writing is annoying'-way. The physcology (no idea how you spell that word)of it all, the insight on the emostions on each character, you made me like Bianca(!) I cried lots and lots of times. The fact that you made Piper overprotect Chris made a great plot and all that came with it. Your original Halliwells was really well written, I almost consider them canon. Sorry for the long rant, all in all, I love love loved your story, its definitively going on my favorites list. Well done!! |
| Sakurabound 2007-10-31 ch 61, | abuseOh my god. This is the most amazing charmed fanfic that I have ever read! It was..just wow. You are an amazing writer. Wow. so good! Abbz |
| Hazel Maraa 2007-09-23 ch 61, | abuseThere's just something about really well written stories about things like this that just make me sob and sob and sob. -sniffles and wipes eyes with sleeves- You had me wicked scared for a few seconds there, buddy. I mean, really scared. I was like, "-sobsobsob-NO, he can't DIE! -sobsniffle-". Yeah. Lol. Great - absolutely amazingg story, really. Loved it. Adored it. 'Twas beautiful, it was. Cheers, ~Hazel* |
| Diary 2007-09-23 ch 61, | abuseI like how all the characters are fleshed out. |
| neb92 2007-03-11 ch 61, | abuseI loved this so much. It was seriously so gripping that I can't remember what the beginning was about, I remember the latest tragedy because the words are still making me sad about them. Im gonna add this to my C2, and I swear, It is an awesome story. |
| neb92 2007-03-11 ch 58, | abuseI haven't reviewed in alot of chapters, but DAMN! What the hell is he going to do to Prue!?!?!?!? |
| neb92 2007-03-10 ch 37, | abuseBy making Prue live through those memories, arent the Khail helping the source create more ties? She remembers what happened, kinda like Chris, and and and... THis is starting to get bad... I love this story so much, I can't wait to see how it ends. |
| neb92 2007-03-10 ch 32, | abuseI noticed that there was more than one power of three right after the spell. Sometimes the Halliwells are just so thick. But then again, they aren't just reading their story on the computer at home, they are going through stress, anger, and alot of other feelings... Lots of things to think about huh? |
| neb92 2007-03-10 ch 30, | abuseCrap. That is just NOT GOOD! Not good at all. I am in love with this story. Seriously. It is just SO GOOD. |
| neb92 2007-03-10 ch 26, | abuseDang, this is starting to get bad... |
| neb92 2007-03-10 ch 24, | abuseTwo marriages are okay, but one is destroyed. This is starting to get sad. |