Wah! CooL..though it's short, it's real nice haha...i can picture the scene in my mind...hmm.. u should do more of this, haha. i think "Vivant Rex" sounds better than "Fall of the Dynasty" haha.. oh yeah, read ya review on my "everything is in a dream..."..thanks _ first time i got such a good review (or wadeva ya call it)...i'm not bein' sarcastic...really, arigato i'll try to improve my writings, but i've been bz with lotsa sch wrk lately, demo atashi wa gambarimasu! hehZ.. oh well, eh...nothin much to sey, xcept rite more! _ ja ne

*finally reviews this* Shame on me T_T I love how you write KiHatsu. You have that perfect blend of managing to be jaded and yet... I don't want to say innocent, because that's not quite right, but that's all that's coming to my pea brained mind right now. And for some reason, I really liked that 'I hadn't even shaved.' line; just how true it is that really major events tend to happen when you're least prepared for them... okay, I think I'm reading into it too much now *sweatdrops* But, well, you rock D

Interesting, reflectful and nice, just like a sunset.

very emotional, yet serious story on Kihatsu's point of view. may be you can write one on how Chuuoh feels before he died.

Oh wow. I think you captured Kihatsus feelings beautifully. I especially love the last line.

*sob sob* This... *sniff* is nice... *sob sob* *goes into a corner and sulks*

*applause* ENCORE! :D More? *rolls over and begs* :D

To pard: ... dammit. it wasn't long enough.

Seriously, shi thinks you did great in capturing Hatsu's dilemma and confusion in being thrust into a role he didn't ask for. *eyes winged big kitty* ... shi'd really like to see you expand on this - write more - cuz there just aren't that many HE fics out there, much less thoughtful ones like this! *taku!*