Loved the story, I know you wont be reading this but i will comment anyway. This story had so much emotion in it. I also loved the songs you chose for this. Learning to Breathe, Iris (favorite song of mine), My Immortal such beautiful songs. Am I blue from Kevin Conroy would have been a nice touch at the end. Thanks for an awesome story. Oh yeah I am also from PH!

Omfg this story was INCREDIBLE
The plot was so well thought out and you're such a BEAUTIFUL writer I was literally in tears at parts
One of the best wonderbat stories! 333333

that was awesome. most definitely one of the best founding favorites stories.i like that development of the orig 3 and the history of beginning normally i despise flashbacks but this story ROCKED. so very happy to have read it. thank you

Either my vocabulary is more limited than I thought, or there aren't enough words in the English dictionary to describe how much I THOROUGHLY enjoyed reading this story from you. These are the sort of fandom fics I love the most, the ones where authors create a whole new past for the characters and intertwine them with present canon events so seamlessly that fiction and non-fiction is distorted because of the plausibility of events. I have always loved this pairing, but I've never really delved into the fanfiction from it, especially those that have "Trinity" pairings with Supes because the few that I've read were sort of corny \ You however, have set the bar for those aspiring to write and needing the right kind of inspiration to pen down their thoughts regarding the set. Excellent, EXCELLENT job!

The emotions (and non-emotions for some lol) were done PERFECTLY! There was not a doubt in my mind that these characters would respond in a particular way or interact with each other as such. The strong friendship Diana shared with Kal was evident throughout, and hints of his affection towards her was noticed but still not enough to really convey how much he felt for her (until he finally confessed how hurt he was), which made me understand why Diana was oblivious to everything. The beginning of her first meeting with Bruce, to his butt squeeze, to the dinner, to everything in between leading up to their most romantic moment was sheer brilliance. It's most understandable after reading this why Diana felt so strongly for him over all the other men she had interacted with, especially Superman (and poor Wally of course). After all, it's Bruce Wayne people, who could resist those piercing blue eyes? *fangirl squeal* Those plot bunnies worked overtime in creating the right situations to place them in, and it paid off.

OH EM GEE...Bruce and Diana's first time together...I was completely FLUSHED and squealing like the hyper fangirl I am because that was definitely my favourite chapter of them all! Oh how I wish you would write more mature fics for these two because that was hot and spicy yet timid enough to keep you safe within the confines of a T-rated fic. So hint hint Aurora...give a little something extra to the big kids too lol.

The battle scene...I have no idea how you even conceptualized that (though it sounds eerily familiar, I'm still not 100 percent sure if it's canon or not - yeah, you're that good) but you did it well! You truly had me scared for a moment there that Superman really went ballistic over being rejected by Diana, and it was the only fleeting moment I felt he was OOC. Then I read a little more and realized, "wait...it's a clone! OMG a Superman clone with Supes powers trying to take over the world XD" ACTION! The right amount of action and drama in this romance piece, loved it, loved it, loved it! The phoenix scene and later on, Bruce's confrontation with the gods was excellently portrayed. It was obvious that you did your research on the necessary Greek myths and sacrificial rites before penning those scenes, unless you were already familiar with them and you're a lot more intelligent and versatile than I'm giving you credit for :D

I can go on for days telling you all the things I love about the story, but then it's all going to sound like a repetition of "LOVE" in each chapter lol. So to sum it all up, overall this was definitely my favourite piece from you thus far, and my favourite JL BM/WW fanfiction. The End :D It has greatly encouraged me to read your other JL fanfictions to enjoy the lovely and fantastic ideas you have to share with the world. Excellent job, I hope to hear more from you in the future, and I shall pray that you keep fighting the good fight like the Wonder Woman you already are :)

Sincerely,

P.O.J.A _

Loved, loved, loved! this. Such a great and enticing story. I liked how you created this, the whole plot was so amazing that I even ended up reading this twice! You even managed to add some jealousy in this for both of the men, creating a love traingle, which I loved. Emotions were portrayed perfectly and the sequence of events were done amazingly. Thank you sooooo much for the great read. I hope you make more like this sometime in the future. :D

I just had to reread this again. and I love it all the same

I'm not crying... I'm not crying... I'm not crying ...D,:

Such a funny interaction here between B & A. I can just see him understanding the strangeness of B singing in full costume lol. Great job!

That was so amazingly heartwrenchingly breathtakingly beautiful! The English language lacks the requisite words to explain how good this story is. amazing!

I loved every chapter of this story.

You write very well

Also, I want to THANK YOU for the stories you write for us to enjoy. Really. 3 God Bless You. And Happy Writing.

Also, I want to THANK YOU for the stories you write for us to enjoy. Really. 3

Do you know how much you made me cry in the last few chapters? Like, they had their own life that they were rolling down my cheeks uncontrollably. And I would take that as a compliment if I were you. ;P I simply have no words to describe your story. It's one of the best story I have read. So touching. And the way you describe the situation or an emotion is just INCREDIBLE! You deserve a standing ovation... :)

This is fantastic! I loved reading every single chapter

Before I started writing my fanfic, I was skeptical that there could be an over 50k bmww fic and be entertaining the entire way. But after reading this last summer, I believed it was possible and became inspired to finally began writing my story a few weeks later. Hands down my favorite bmww story