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brokenpassions
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
aww very cute.
dennoNel
2005-10-26 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so sweet! I'll bet all your reviews atsrt with "aw!". XD But it was so cute! ^^ I like this. This is going on my favorites. ;) I love little fluffy stories like htis. Nothing more to say but I love it! So yeah! Love it! :D

*snicker* Today's Dress Like Someone Else day at my school for our spirit week. I'm dressed as Ryan Kuhn aka the Jackal off of 13 Ghosts. Everyone is scared of me! >:D

-Kia
Silly-Gal-11
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Aww, it's short and sweet. I like it:P Good job
azure-tears
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Heh, cute, pointless fluff. A good thing for a rainy morning.

I guess they were both in character...(shrugs) Wilt and Eduardo aren't really important characters to me, so I don't really notice if they're acting correctly or not. Sorry.

Perhaps you should proofread your story a little more because I saw some errors in there towards the middle. Just a heads up.
Seraphim737
2005-10-21 . chapter 1
Aw!! ^^ That was so sweet and cute! I liked it!
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