I'm mentally adding 'but should have' to the end of your title. I particularly enjoyed the last two, not saying that the first 3 weren't enjoyable, but I barely remember them after the bathroom!sex and the sweet goodness of the last.

Great job!

God! That's sweet! Intense. What a great idea, very original. And what a lovely ending!

Nic.

ha really good! at first i thought it was confusing but then i got into it :) i loved the movie Red Eye and you helped me look at it in a whole other way thank lol

This was something different! And I loved every moment of it! You are a wonderful writer... and as one of the other reviewers mentioned, insanely precocious. I'm 24 and have a 14 year old brother who can barely construct a paragraph.

While I usually don't prefer the happily ever after Jackson/Lisa stories, and lean more toward the dark rape-fantasy stories, I think your "happily ever after" final segment was my favorite out of all of them! One can't help but wonder if that's the true reaction Jackson would have if he received a cancellation call... I'd like to think so.

Wow!! That was so good! You captured both their characters perfectly and I really like the way you made a construction of the fic. More of Red Eye fiction from you would be wonderful! :D

Nice. Rewrites, sort of, of the scenes, and good use of second-person POV... yes, yes, I think you're quite the character, my friend. Now, if only you wrote for fandoms I've actually heard of. :)

I have to say, a very interesting concept. I liked how this fic was done, and I thought you pulled it off convincingly. I liked #1 the best. Definitely a good way to end it.

Okay had to leave another review because I just read your profile and you're only 15?! That's nuts for how good you write. I'm in college(university) and you write better than most of the people there that's insane! You are very talented.

Great job! I have to admit that looking at the title I was like 'yeah maybe I'll read it' but then I read your summary and thought 'what the heck'?
You used so many different and intriguing writing techniques. First of all the roman numerals were good to let us know where the story was and once I figured out that they went backwards then it was even better. It was great to inject the quotes in with each section and that first scene was just brilliant. In fact, I loved every scene especially the last one. It seems like 90% of the people who saw the movie would have liked to see that happen or at least thought about it.
Honestly I thought the fic was brilliant and your writing and style is really on another level. I hope you will write more!

Ok you're right I did want to read it I like it,you think you can do a story that continues with #1 'you don't have to do this ,any of this' because that would be a kool AU to write about plz

I really liked this a lot. Beautiful writing. I liked how you used the "you" form... it made you feel closer to the characters, I think.

Keep up the good work... this was excellent.

Interesting twists on the story!

Wow. That was... surprisingly good. xD Your style... it's just... -extremely- well paced. The writings so smooth, no bumps with anything abrupt or obvious grammar mistakes. Especially your... "mature" scene. xD Those need to be handled with up most care and I feel you did an excellent job, probably the best I've seen thus far. :) Because of this, I'm adding you to my favorites. ^^

I liked the scenes you picked to write too, such as where you were brave enough to actually kill Jackson. Most fan-girls would weep if they wrote that (such as myself, which is why I don't write xD). The last with Jackson off the job was also very cute. I'd never saw him that way... but you brought a new perspective to me, where I could see that now. Good job. :D

Overall, love your writing! ^^ I'm going to add you to my alert list now as to keep an eye out for you. xD Wouldn't want to miss any other master pieces you write, now would I? :3

Keep up the good work!

Yay! Another well-written fic in the category! This is definite a great Red Eye fic. I like your characterisations and dark humor. Which reminds me that I should write a fic, too.