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| senkoed 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseXD i love the ending. ero-sennin? you're evil. |
| SAQ78642 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseXD! ROTFLMAO! |
| Fate 2006-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Cackles* Poor Iruka! |
| enviousinner 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abusewhy so few reviews? this is so well written i love it! made me laugh all the way and how it eneded with jiraya? perfect! He privately calls it his pervert radar. i loved that line! anyways, plase update ur other story, harry potter and the nnja reallity, soon. |
| Nerdling 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abusethat was... FUNNY! hahahahahahahahaha! poor iruka. oh well . at least he knows that he's loved lol |
| AdSeriatim 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abuseLOL. oh god. just the thought of Iruka having pervert radar makes me crack up. XD poor Iruka... I like especialy how you threw in Gai being well endowed, because face it, we all are horrified to think about that green spandex. :D love the fic. |
| MysteryLady-Tx 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abusehahahaha...LMAO! Poor Iruka to SEXY for his own GOOD...LOL |
| health-critic 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was hilarious!! "He calls it is his pervert radar." That was cool!! And my favorite line!! Also along with "nearly every ninja in Konoha is also a pervert" Your writing style is excellent. Very smooth and really, really clear. And not all stumbly either. I don't have to strain myself to read or pay attention, which I find is really rare. And it was really good how you wrapped it all up with Jiraiya, the natural pervert, at the end! Overall, excellent job!! |