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Reviews For: Pervert Radar

senkoed
2006-07-20
ch 1,
abuseXD i love the ending. ero-sennin? you're evil.
SAQ78642
2006-06-26
ch 1,
abuseXD! ROTFLMAO!
Fate
2006-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse*Cackles*
Poor Iruka!
enviousinner
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abusewhy so few reviews? this is so well written i love it! made me laugh all the way and how it eneded with jiraya? perfect!

He privately calls it his pervert radar.

i loved that line! anyways, plase update ur other story, harry potter and the nnja reallity, soon.
Nerdling
2005-11-27
ch 1,
abusethat was... FUNNY! hahahahahahahahaha! poor iruka. oh well . at least he knows that he's loved lol
AdSeriatim
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL. oh god. just the thought of Iruka having pervert radar makes me crack up. XD poor Iruka... I like especialy how you threw in Gai being well endowed, because face it, we all are horrified to think about that green spandex. :D love the fic.
MysteryLady-Tx
2005-10-25
ch 1,
abusehahahaha...LMAO! Poor Iruka to SEXY for his own GOOD...LOL
health-critic
2005-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was hilarious!!

"He calls it is his pervert radar." That was cool!! And my favorite line!! Also along with "nearly every ninja in Konoha is also a pervert"

Your writing style is excellent. Very smooth and really, really clear. And not all stumbly either. I don't have to strain myself to read or pay attention, which I find is really rare.

And it was really good how you wrapped it all up with Jiraiya, the natural pervert, at the end!
Overall, excellent job!!
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