I highly enjoyed this chapter. The story in general is well written, and the storyline is fascinating. I'm eager to find out how the Elrics factor in, and I love your portrayal of Gracia. I really want to find out what happened to Elysia too, and Maes is awake! >__<

I'll hold on to hopes that you might have another chapter saved up, or that maybe you'll pick up the story again? (<--if you'd been disenchanted by the ending of the anime, the new one started!! XD; inspiration?) Thanks for the great 6 chapters, in any case!

~*Kira*~

This is an amazing story. I've been up a while reading this. It's 1:24 and i just couldn't pull myself away. Please udpate soon, i'm waiting with bated breath to see what will happen now!

Please, please, please update!
This story is REALLY good!
PLEASE dont abandon it!!

This story is very well written and if you ever continue it I would love to read the rest. ^.^

We need more military-centric action fics!

Ooh.. this is really good, ever plan to update it? :)

Aw please hurry with the updates!!

Hm, there's a lot of this story that I don't remember. Somehow I think I got behind on updates... Anyway, I hope that this fic will get some attention soon, too! Especially now that Hughes has woken up - you can't leave us hanging there! As I said before, this fandom is in dire need of decent genfic (particularly decent genfic involving lots of Roy action and *cough* torture), and this fic is one of the best. I hope you will pick it up again soon. I'll keep checking! :)

so far so good. why are they trying to kill hues? why is everyone trying to kill hues? update soon.

Oh my gods! This story is amazing!! It's so sad you haven't updated since December... not that I should talk... anyway... it's so brilliant!! You have the characters perfectly and the tone of the show is awesome, jumping from serious to humor and back again with a snap of Mustang's fingers. ;-) Completely brilliant. Great idea and I can't wait for the update.

Aw, come on! Ya can't leave me hanging like this! ;__; Have you no mercy!
Incidentally, Roy and Riza need to get together. Not in your story, necessarily, but they NEVER EVER got together in the show or in the movie. Sure, they may have been a little more touchy-feely, but what about getting married? Huh?
Sorry, just your odd ending place reminded me of that. Please, if it's just for me! I don't care if you update in a year! I will read it! ;__;

No no no! Not Mustang!

Ooh, this was *too* well written! I can't type right! (Judging by how long it took me to write the right right)

Did that make any sense!? GAAHH!

Aw, Armstrong is one of the best soldiers ever. He can follow orders and break them at the SAME TIME! That takes skilz.
Again, nothing wrong with the chapter. I didn't know you had a beta, too! Shout out to her. I'm also available for beta, but you have one, so I don't know why I'm telling you. ^^;; Oh well!
I just wanted to say that I know nothing about Gracia's character, but I'd like to say that she seems to be portrayed rightly in this fic. She's not ditzy or overly-feminine. I think that it's accurate to say those things about her.
I love this story! *sigh*

I'm glad you decided to go further than five chapters. Intricate plots are so much fun, aren't they? I've just started doing it with one of my stories and I'm having a blast!
*Ahem*
This is certainly an interesting development. Military uniforms? Very suspicious...
This time, I didn't see anything wrong with the chapter. You're a very talented writer. ^^ Even the things like incorperating humor into a dramatic story. Some people seem to think that humor has no place in drama, but humor has its place everywhere. EVERYWHERE. I'm delighted to see you recognize that. Great job!
And I did e-mail two of my friends who would enjoy this story.

Yay! Ed and Al! You wrote them to the letter. I didn't mention that last chapter! You've got a nice, tight grip on all their character traits and write them believably. I wonder what part Ed and Al are going to play in this trip...? But I digress.
Again, not many things wrong with this chapter grammar-wise (one I can remember sort-of) but the beginning with Gracia taking a walk was particularly effective. To make it just a little bit more so, I would make the part where she was taking the walk just a little bit longer. I don't know how you could manage that, but that's just something I noticed. It seemed to jump from a walk to a beating.
But a great chapter overall. ^^ I'm telling my friend about this one...

Ah, I