Wow.

Seriously.

I'm just about speechless.

What a great piece of writing you've created here. I liked the line about wondering who it was actually that was corrupting Rufus, as it was a very good end to the story. :3

Awesome work.

What do you say at the end for the yaoi ans the personnes under the ange of 18 ? ... I'm 15! And I'm mature for understant! I'm not a sex-obessed!

I just like the pretty bishônens...

(but I'm totally crazy many times...)

Tsuki'

I... love it.

Tseng's care for Rufus is just... too cute.

You really gave me a reason to love this pair as my favorite yaoi pair ever

HS

Very good story! I loved it!

xD Dood, this fic was fricking awsome. I love thier character, and the shortness was quick and sweet. Good job.

OMG. OMG. This is very well written! I just soo very good. _ *happy dance*

:: screams at everyone on FF.net :: This story only has two.. well three reviews! How! It's so unbelieveably good! _ It's brilliant writing, great plot and really excellent character developement! I can only beg for more... :: puppy dog eyes ::

-Leanne

The concept disturbs me, the writing I like lots.

Very good. I quite like the way you've portrayed Tseng here.