I have had this fic bookmarked for so very long! I am so glad that I finally got to read it. I was fascinated from the first paragraph to the last...evil cliffie that it is.

What a fantastic job you two have done. I never thought that a MPreg story could be funny, serious, sad, tense, and many other emotions all rolled up in one. I guess it was just a hormone festival.

Thanks so much for this. Now I am off to find the sequel!

I have laughed hysterically through Sheppard's delivery and cried in anguish at his attempted suicides. Gasped in horror as I gazed on the devastation of the nursery and Dreya's dead body. Held my breath waiting for the other shoe to fall and reveal who the invaders were; went from slouching in my chair as I read a good fic to sitting straight up in anticipation of one of the most amazing adventures of John Sheppard and the SGA expedition that I have ever read. Then at Chapter 35 I was stabbed in the gut when it said 'The end'

*Screaming and babbling incoherently* ...total relief to find there is a sequel.

Whew! 1,0 thumbs up! 'Nuff said.

poor Sheppy's sick and noone knows why :(

poor sheppy :(

I have to say...

I haven't read a story this damn good in a long while!

I am looking forward to finishing the sequel to this one.

Beautiful work, this is definitely one that I will be revisiting for a long time to come.

~Hyper

This is awesome. I've been reading it on and off for the past few days now in between classes. It has all the amusement without the stupidness and unbelievability of MPREG. I'm addicted to it. :D

OMG, I luv your story SO FREAKING MUCH! It was well written, very addictive, and had an awesome plot! ^_^

I'm not done reading yet, so i'll get to the 'well done! Great fic! write more!' stuff later...

For now, i just thought you should know something. A friend recommended this fic a while back...but i was saving it for a rainy day. that happend last night around 2200hrs.

It's now 0425.

Every damn time i get to the end of a chapter, it's like - oh noes! a cliffie! must...read...more!
And i'm STILL READING!Damn you both!

*is glad not working tomorrow* :P

Felt the need to interrupt my reading of this wondeful story at the end of chapter 13 because...Come on! Poor Sheppard! This extra whumping is uncalled for! Naughty writer, abusing characters in such a cruel way should be punishable by...the law of fanfic. Yes! You shall now be sentenced to writing warm and fuzzy scenes to make up for it! Which I am sure you have so I shall resume my reading :) Oh, me likey!

What an amazing story! It out stripped every one of my expectations and i simply cannot wait for the sequel!

Wow. I waited until you had completed (?) the story before sitting down and reading all the way through. What a great concept, and really well handled. Could definitely tell someone had first hand experience! The only thing I was disappointed with was your wimping out on the whole sore, swollen breats and breast feeding experience.

Please write the sequel soon. Cliffhangers are evil.

Damn RL and everything connected to it. Finally I'm able to read this "ending" and what you do? You slap us all in the face. Really is still burning. Can't wait for that sequel and write sooner than soon!

What a FANTASTIC story! It's just taken me the better part of a week to read it from start to finish, and what a finish. How could you leave it there?? hehehe
I was at times crying with laughter and feeling so bad for John - and everyone around him - that Dreya's death at the end was a complete surprise.
Very much looking forward to the sequel. Sam :)

Oh...oh, just oh.

Great ending and I really don't know where to start. So, first, yay me for guessing who the bad guys are *g*.

I liked John and Ronon's quiet time and how Ronon's not really saying much did more to convince John that Rodney was right, than all of Rodney's words ever could. I was glad to see that John had resolved to speak to Kate. There's still all that to sort out and now all this new stuff going on!

*Meep* Dreya! I kinda wondered whether you'd kill her off, it seems like the sort of evil thing you two would do *vbg*. Poor John, having to deal with everything and the broken bond as well. I'm glad Lily and Rodney are okay though.

That ending was just great. I really felt the swirling emotions of anger, shock and determination to get those responsible, and how the three men used the desire to find the guilty party to shore themselves up and stave off the sadness, used the anger to fuel them when they would otherwise have just curled up somewhere.

I really can't wait for the sequel, so I hope the muses are musing, the bunnies are hopping and RL is kind.

GAH! *speechless*