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| Soului 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseLooking forward to the next chapter. You do the romantic rivalry thing very well. In other fics I've read it's come out as sort of sappy, this is intriguing. Keep up the good work! |
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Oh that is just great! Loved it. Good pace, great thoughts and insights. :D Adding to fav list. |
| WingsOfMorphius 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseHiya! I jst made a new C2, Hunter Girl, for all Valerie-based stories. I just HAD to add this one. I'll send you an invite to join, too. Hope you'll say yes! |
| Evilevergreen 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I liked it. I kind of hate that it's only a one-shot. |
| Fey Phantom 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseHeh, that was cute. ^^ I know it didn't really have any romance in it, but I enjoyed the cuteness anyways. This story really has me wanting more DP right now... with Valerie in it. It's true, we haven't seen any more of that relationship since Reign Storm and I really want to know what's going to happen and see how things have changed - like with Valerie's father, Valerie and Danny being friends, and Valerie's relationship to Phantom (especially after the "forgot how cute you were" line in TUE). Just one thing I can't figure out is why Danny took Tucker to talk with him... I was kinda hoping we'd find out because it really could be anything. Meh, suppose it's not important... Anyway, enjoyed it. I'll go on to read some of your longer stories in a bit. I'm a little busy right now, maybe tonight or at some other time in the week I'll be able to start. Till then, ~Fey |
| Digitaldreamer 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, some very nice Sam and Valerie interaction here. I always do love to see the sparks kind of fly. And it was cute to see Danny sticking up for everyone against Dash. So very cute. ^^ Nice job! ~*Digitaldreamer*~ |
| C.E. Hobbit 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseHmm. I like it. It's really discriptive and unique. Although I'm not one for DannyValerire, I'm more of a DannySam person, (I know, steriotypical) it's still really good. You could keep it going, if you wanted, but I like this way too, it lets you decide your own ending. Bravo! |
| The Sleep Warrior 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusei like the idea. the whole truce/friendship thingie. just wondering, but where did they go? danny and tucker? or did they just "go". anyway, yay! keep writing! |
| SlayerStarr 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuselove it, continue! |
| xheartkreuzx 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusethat was really good! |