The centering dot you were talking about...is it a bindi? Keep writing!

Aww this is cute! Shu and Touma and Shin are very in character. I love it!-

Hey! That's really good! I normally don't read fantasy stories like these, but this is really good. It caught my attention. A very nice adaptation of the trooper storyline. I can't wait to read more.

COOL! It jumps around a bit, but I REALLY like it!

yeah! you updated your story! and you finally got ryo into the picture! lol I was kind of in a hurry when I read this, so I probably didn't get all the details straight, but was the thing that shu heard about the fire and air thing about ryo and touma? can't wait for the next chapter! (lol i'm so proud of myself, i actually had enough brain cells to make up a name for myself. i got tired of going by a smiley face. :-P)

yea! you have this on ff.net now! i've been reading it on theria's site, please write more soon, i've been dying to know what happens to touma, and wanna know when ryo meets the others!

*bounces around* You must write more and soon, or I shall sic Akio on you...though you might like that...hrmm must think about that so more.

Great story...must write more...please *gives Okami-chan puppy dog eyes*