wow. this story is amazing. it was so poignantly written... sweet, simple, cute, and elegant too... keep it up! i love this!

Very, very cute. And very well written. I adore this. *blows a kiss*

Nice ending...

wow... i want to say how cute, but when is touya ever cute?

really though, you got the chara and the situation across beautifully. bravo for something so short!

Oh my goodness! You're pairings for those manga are my favs too. ^^ Every single one of them. I mean Kakei/Saiga isn't heard often. I adore it. Uhh... anyway. This was very sweet. Short and sweet. :)

more! more! please!

SO SHORT

GO ON!