AW! I like this story.

beautiful, I'm not too shure about Teyla's reactions when she falls and crys but a great story

I love it! And you know it!
Camy

It's very cute, and loveful ! Just what I ned to read ;)
Miss Sheppard, a French reader.

That was so sweet. Wonderful fluff.

Oh it let you post...hallelujah...;D...Well i like and i hope you write more...
Witch...;D

Very, very nice. The only part I'm going to nag on is that if this takes place in season 1, it's Major John Sheppard. He gets promoted back on Earth somewhere between the first and second episodes of season 2. Other than that, I really enjoyed. Welcome to aimtomissbehave, or whatever it's called.

So cute. You'd better be writing more Shep/Teyla stuff for us, because you are wonderful at it.