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| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 10, | abuseNo no no no, you can't just DUMP the story like this, I would like to know what Parm found out, what will happen to Fracshun and many others I think they agree with me. I'm begging you to please update son... |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 9, | abuseWell well well, Moordryd's got the bug too, that's too bad, I was beggining to think that he got into a coma or something. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting, does Moordryd have a kind heart deep inside of him or is he just playing it?, please update soon. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 7, | abuseI really don't know what to say, only this was a great chapter that reveals the plot a little further, and as for the Dragon Eyes, they should be disqualified from all the races in DC. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 6, | abuseNo, no, no, no, this is just too cruel, Frachsun can't die, please, he's too young to die *sobing*. BTW, great chapter. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 5, | abuseThis is just getting interesting by the minute, I like the story so far, plesse update soon. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter, the story is good so far but don't tell me that all the gear will be infected, that would be disastrous. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseWhy am I not surprised, Word is up to his old schemes again, can't wait to see what's coming next. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 2, | abuseWell I'd say, inspite of everything other say about your work, it's great and getting interesting with the strange virus and all and I agree with Kereea, why did it have to be Fracshun? Oh well I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI think it was great, poor Fracshun I hope he gets well soon, please continue. |
| Atomicrat2552 2007-06-30 ch 10, anon. | abusewell, maybe one of the better fan fictions out there. very few fics portray their characters perfectly to cannon. although, a new chapter would be brilliant. |
| Rangerfan58 2007-04-26 ch 10, anon. | abusenice story so far |
| Silver Booster 2007-04-20 ch 10, | abuseSo, that's it. . .THAT'S IT?!?!?!?!?!? Come ON, THIS IS TOO GOOD to stop! I'm just DYING to know what happens and what Parm found. KEEP IT UP, 'CAUSE YOU'RE THE BEST MYSTERY WRITER EVER! Really, no lie! |
| soccergurl1993 2007-01-11 ch 10, | abuseoh btw if u dont complete dis stry in de next 24 hrs i'm gonna find out where u live and personall fly dere and murder u! so finish it! NOW! : ( |
| alioth 2006-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate or I'll find out where you live and kill you. |