That...is kinda creepy but HECK I LIKE! sorry im...enthusiastic.

Great comparison between humans and vampires, they both act like junkies, vampires craving the blood of humans and humans/junkies craving drugs and other miscellaneous items. You can take this story much further and I would like to see you do that! I like the story so far and would really recomend that you continue with it!

The feelings the writer showed was a really good description if how the movie went. The way Jared was feeling and everthing he was feeling made me see what he was seeing and feel what he was feeling. Good work. In a scale from 1 to 5 I would give this an excellent.

Hey, not bad. I liked it.