awesomely good story! i'm serious, the way you wrote it was just wonderful. It was a bit sad but i couldn't help but fall in love with this fic. my favorite part was in the end where they spoke in unison. it would have been nice if it had ended in a happier way but i can see why you chose to end it there. it fits in perfectly with the song like this.

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Why did you stop? The story kicks butt. I like that song and pairing it with Mitsuru and Mahiru was pure genius. So get back to work or I'll sick my evil dancing squirrells in you! Bewares the squirrells!

Um ya but more peom fics cause it kinda anyway the story is go...great!So please continue.

That was very well done, I applaud,for I can't write song-fics ta save my life...seriously I completely suck at it. I liked this a lot, I found it kinda cute. Till next time, Keep up the great writing! :)